Hannah

Hey there! The main point I want to focus on in this critique is that the old, tried and true essay method of saying, I did this, look: "quote quote ...

there are a lot of people who have written about the torture of mother earth, and there are a lot of people who should be, as we have real problems ...

Ahh, heartbreaking. The intention, the set up, the base for a really powerful piece is all here, but it needs a little more tweaking before I'd call it solid. And ...

Woooooooow~ Color me impressed, this was very well executed, clear, and poignant. The first two stanzas leave nothing to be desired. I can't. I am so glad you wrote them, ...

this is the right way to do rhyming. i am so happy to see this good example, because by posting this, you've given younger writers a beacon to follow. this ...

Nice. This was honest, powerful, and carried itself through to the end in a logical pattern. There are a few things that need to be changed, I think, though, and ...

let's see, a quick tense fix: Not one day have you ever weaken. ^ when you use have, you have to use weakened: have weakened now, on to the piece ...

now now, come on. is this masquerader confident or not confident about his/her abilities? the middle stanza seems strong and cold, but the first and second two seem week, like ...

Hey there. At first, I thought this poem was about something like "good news" or a sweet motto or something like that, but suddenly yer talking about rumors? This needs ...

First impression: WAY TOO MANY PEOPLE. that's probably not a problem in a movie as we'd have faces to tell them apart, but the names are all so non-descript that ...

Woohoo~ So it was cool to read a piece that seemed to have been written with a lot of authority about how the transfer of power happens. I liked the ...

mmmm, nice formatting of the quote, but i guess i don't understand. why use a quote you directly disagree with and ONLY say you disagree with it? there are so ...

okay! i'll bite! this is a riddle. the thing about a riddle is, though, is that it has to be possible, with time, for the guesser to be confident about ...

The first thing I want to say is that I'm confused between the two sections of this story. It seemed in the first part that she was already married with ...

okay, i don't know if it's just from reading gal's review first, but now this poem really spoke to me on the idea of being american abroad, in a world ...