Hannah

First, there are blogs for a reason. If you're taking advantage of the submitted works system while completely ignoring it's purpose, that's a pretty crappy way of you to thank ...

You got it at the end, so you should have gone back and edited everything from that point. Like, you're a poet. You should feel, if not consciously know by ...

Number one! Please take all these line breaks out and punctuation the piece like you would punctuate prose. Even though it's poetry, that's no excuse for silly commas in the ...

Hey girl, this feels like you have two completely different stories going on. I've got this sci-fi -ish world kind of feeling when you talk about the man with bionic ...

Hey, girl. Those opening two lines are fantastic, and you're right. They were worth writing a poem around, but in future iterations, I'd like to see you try to loosen ...

Antonio, you're going to be a good writer, but if I could challenge you to one thing, it would be to read a review, thank the reviewer, and instead of ...

I expected this piece to be completely smooth sailing, but I hit the first stumbling block: A nigh objective eternity in this permanently fast-forwarded era. And then another: I slammed ...

Yay! It's my Lava-bear~ Ahaaa, okay. So I read this through once and went back to read the first "conversations with Tommy" and it totally makes way more sense now. ...

Hi again! You're so awesome. I know we're all here for reviewing, but you are MUCH better at showing thankfulness for reviews than I am. It's a good quality and ...

Hey there, LadyLazarus! I see you're rather new to YWS, so welcome. I'd first like to say that I think your author's note is entirely unnecessary. Your poem should speak ...

Hey there, freedomgirl, and welcome to YWS! It's great to see you are finding your way around the site alright. I recommend also making a post in the Welcome Mat ...

I definitely agree with Walker down there. Like, I know people want to say, "Well the POINT was to make you feel impatient with the repetition of my anxiety, 'cause ...

This is the base of something that will be extremely, ecstatically lovely, my friend, but it needs some work. Before I get into solid critiquing, I just want to say ...

The countdown is really weird for me! Like, in one way I could see how it works to space the numbers out more and more slowly, but the poem actually ...

Short poems are somewhat in the style of riddles. This means not only does every word need to be carefully chosen for tone, but sentences need to be tightly monitored ...