-
Re: A Cowardly Pandora
I'm here for you, Squire Sparkle! I am here with your promised KotGR review and with encouragement to finish up your 10 Green Room Reviews to join us as a ...
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: Benjamin Bumblebee
Rydia, I am here representing our lovely company of Knights of the Green Room, and I just have to say how absolutely enjoyable it is to read this poem. It ...
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: Hope.
Hey, Jonathan! I am learning to spell your name, and I'm here from KotGR with an honorable review for an honorable Knight. Good luck winning the Scribe badge! So, what ...
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: Brain Tumor
Hey there! Knight Hannah here, representing the Knights of the Green Room with the third of your promised reviews. So, what I loved when I first got into this piece ...
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: The Lion and the Monkey
You said below that the exercise was trying to make the reader care for these characters and be crushed by the outcome, so that's how I'm going to look at ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: I see you
Lovely! I am enchanted by the idea in the opening of this poem: a delta being compared to a mother. You know, when I rationally think about it, the river ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Deleted 36
Hey, Lumi. Thought I'd stop by and see what you were up to. So, the first thing I noticed was this sentence: is unjust to tell us exactly what happened; ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: quiet demolitionist
Back for a little more from you, Persy. Hope I can be helpful. It seems like tonight I am all about the viscerality in poetry: bringing out physical (maybe subconscious) ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Half A Hope
Nice, shoaib. I like that you get some quiet imagery in here. Maybe because it's nighttime and I like darker, calmer things. Not to say that bodies in rubble is ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Rewritten
Alright, alright. So I am so very glad that you are alive and exploring your world through poetry. I especially love that you have a pretty obvious direct address and ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: I Miss Living in Obscurity
Girl, first of all, this should be your ending: Break the mirror. I am standing on a ruin. This is like PURE strength and amazingness and just gets weakened by ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: No one cares about us
Ooh, this one is really depressing. I know how positive you are, generally, so to hear the end of this poem -- the denouncement of all of the hopes and ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Unlisted
Spinelli! I love you! I've missed your sharpness! Let's start with what i like about this poem: I love the simple beginning. I love the simplicity of the statement that ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: When The Heart Sings Alone
Hey there, Leo! If you are in the rhyming and meter school of poetry, I'm afraid we may not meet much after this! And that would make me sad, but ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The Engineer and the Enquirer.
That title is absolutely amazing, yo. That title, in fact, paired with the general subject matter of this poem, seems to be more of a poem in itself -- just ...
Aug 25, 2013
