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Hey, Oliver. What I really loved about this essay was that it got me thinking about my life outside of the information your presented. You mentioned that people are addicted ...

Hey there! You requested, and here I am. I have some advice about the foundation of this essay that I hope can help you for essays in the future. First, ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS, and good luck with the results of this final project! I'm going to try to give you some advice for future essays so you can ...

Hey there! I have a couple of general comments on this essay that I hope you can use on any essay assignments in the future. First, I was told by ...

Hey, Krizshel! So I'm here to give some advice that can help you moving forward, and we'd better start from the very first conception of the essay idea. I know ...

Hey there, Neil! I saw you just submitted your technology essay, and I want to welcome you to YWS! I'm a moderator here, so if you have any questions at ...

Hey, AlyKat! I love the definitive voice that permeates this article right from the get-go. It's authoritative, strong, and doesn't bother with any sort of fancy frills, which makes it ...

Hey there, Brynt, and welcome to YWS! Just so you know, I came to this essay first because the work description was "wee". Very attractive and inspirational. Haha. When I ...

Haha, fortis. So does this secretly belong in essays? I'm not going to critique the construction of the poem, then, 'cause that would be counter intuitive, but I am going ...

Love absolutely love the narrative here. I think pretty much most of this gold at first glance -- the kind of poem people would look at and think "hey, that's ...

Hey! So what's odd about this chapter is that even though I'm popping in on what's labeled chapter five, I feel like I haven't missed anything. Maybe there's more information ...

Ohhhh. Oh no! So we'll start here: there's definitely value in being able to make your reader puzzle and think about something you present. It gets them involved and engaged ...

So, I guess you're referring to music as a "her" in this poem? She seems to feature in most of the stanzas, but oddly not in the first, where I ...

Hmm. I like most of this poem. I think it's interesting that you chose an archaic voice with which to address the sea -- it automatically shows your respect and ...

So I remember that in English class a lot of the poems we read were based around political times, maybe because in those periods they were popular and spoke to ...