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Hannah

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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Re: The spark of creation

    Hey there, Henox! I'm gonna share some thoughts with you as I read through this! I hope that whatever I say will be helpful to you, but feel free to ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: ...

    Hey there, fiend! I am not letting you run away from me for good~ Haha, let's see what I can do for you and this lovely essay! So, on a ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Hunger Games Entry

    Fastest reaction time you've ever seen, am I right? Gotta be fast to stay alive or something like that. (I haven't actually read the Hunger Games books!) So let's dive ...

    Jun 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Lights Out

    Hey, rhiasofia! I'm here for a review~ Okay. I like the opening three lines. Are these where you originally started writing the poem? They feel like they are the lines ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Guilt

    Hello again, Bee. In essence, I like this story. I think it's very relevant with some current events that have been going on in Florida that are gaining media attention ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Look at Me

    WOAH. haha, maybe I just haven't read enough poetry, but I feel like this is the first time I've read a flipped poem that actually worked well and none of ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Flip Side

    Hey, Bee! As you requested, I'm here with my thoughts. Okay, so here's what happened the first time I was reading through: I got confused by the sentence structure in ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Juju: A Tribute

    Temi. Thank you. I was grateful for this writing from the moment this line passed through me: For if the sky could be our sign for danger approaching then it ...

    May 28, 2014
  • Other » General, Literature Re: A Novel Idea (Random Prose)

    Hello again, Jared! Okay, so first things first, I liked the idea of these. I liked especially the concept that somehow the reader was involved with creating this writing -- ...

    May 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: I Could Fly

    Aley! Hey, Aley love! I was struck with an interesting thought while I was reading this and thinking about the poem of yours I previously reviewed. I'm wondering -- hear ...

    May 28, 2014
  • Other » Humor, Dramatic Re: Only in 'Merica

    HMMMMMMMMMMMM. Trying to capture the entirety of American culture in one poem, are we? ahaha. Okay, I have to say first that I like the disconnectedness of this. I like ...

    May 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I love you Connor Wells.

    Hey there, Retro! I liked the idea of focusing on one moment of a person in ACTION, not just their looks or the speaker's thoughts about how cool they are, ...

    May 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: To Contend with the Devil

    Jared! I'm only too happy to hop on over here and give you a review in return for all your hard work with us on review day. I haven't posted ...

    May 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Hope... I *will* fight

    Hi, Cynder! I'm here as you requested in a PM! So, I like the two voices. I think there's the potential for a nice dynamic there -- conflict is what ...

    May 27, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Across the Room

    Purple! This is so refreshing. I dunno why, but popping into this voice feels very fresh and focused to me right now. There's an intense spot light on this character's ...

    May 27, 2014


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— William Shakespeare