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Re: The spark of creation
Hey there, Henox! I'm gonna share some thoughts with you as I read through this! I hope that whatever I say will be helpful to you, but feel free to ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: ...
Hey there, fiend! I am not letting you run away from me for good~ Haha, let's see what I can do for you and this lovely essay! So, on a ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Hunger Games Entry
Fastest reaction time you've ever seen, am I right? Gotta be fast to stay alive or something like that. (I haven't actually read the Hunger Games books!) So let's dive ...
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: Lights Out
Hey, rhiasofia! I'm here for a review~ Okay. I like the opening three lines. Are these where you originally started writing the poem? They feel like they are the lines ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: Guilt
Hello again, Bee. In essence, I like this story. I think it's very relevant with some current events that have been going on in Florida that are gaining media attention ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: Look at Me
WOAH. haha, maybe I just haven't read enough poetry, but I feel like this is the first time I've read a flipped poem that actually worked well and none of ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: The Flip Side
Hey, Bee! As you requested, I'm here with my thoughts. Okay, so here's what happened the first time I was reading through: I got confused by the sentence structure in ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: Juju: A Tribute
Temi. Thank you. I was grateful for this writing from the moment this line passed through me: For if the sky could be our sign for danger approaching then it ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: A Novel Idea (Random Prose)
Hello again, Jared! Okay, so first things first, I liked the idea of these. I liked especially the concept that somehow the reader was involved with creating this writing -- ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: I Could Fly
Aley! Hey, Aley love! I was struck with an interesting thought while I was reading this and thinking about the poem of yours I previously reviewed. I'm wondering -- hear ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: Only in 'Merica
HMMMMMMMMMMMM. Trying to capture the entirety of American culture in one poem, are we? ahaha. Okay, I have to say first that I like the disconnectedness of this. I like ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: I love you Connor Wells.
Hey there, Retro! I liked the idea of focusing on one moment of a person in ACTION, not just their looks or the speaker's thoughts about how cool they are, ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: To Contend with the Devil
Jared! I'm only too happy to hop on over here and give you a review in return for all your hard work with us on review day. I haven't posted ...
May 27, 2014 -
Re: Hope... I *will* fight
Hi, Cynder! I'm here as you requested in a PM! So, I like the two voices. I think there's the potential for a nice dynamic there -- conflict is what ...
May 27, 2014 -
Re: Across the Room
Purple! This is so refreshing. I dunno why, but popping into this voice feels very fresh and focused to me right now. There's an intense spot light on this character's ...
May 27, 2014
