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Hannah

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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Green [Edited, but still open for reviews!]

    Ohhhh, why did you distract me from my other reviewing!? Haha, no it's my fault! Can I just say, though, that this was beautiful!? Not the fresh, new-life spring green ...

    Feb 1, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Icy Paths Prologue - A Small Victory

    I'm here! I'm here! I'm here just like I promised! ^_^ Here are my comments! 1st Read ; Oooh, this looks to be promising! Right now it seems like I'm ...

    Feb 1, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Rogue ~ Prologue

    Merry! It seems like you've gotten a lot of critiques on this work already! ^_^ I'll just point out some general things, then, rather than going through it all in ...

    Feb 1, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Gentleman's Club ~ One

    Finally got to it, Merry! Sorry about the delay. School, you know...

    Feb 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Bad Boy

    Well, I find that when I give critiques, most of it is obviously my opinion! Everything that anyone says, you are free to disregard or to listen to -- it's ...

    Jan 31, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Little Miss Photogenic

    ^_^ As I'm reading this through for the first time, I just want to point out my delight in finding certain sentences and lines that actually rhyme quite nicely. Hehe, ...

    Jan 27, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Could Write a Poem for You

    Hallo, Evi! Since you so kindly took the time to look at some of my pieces, I thought I'd critique a few of yours as well. ^_^ First of all, ...

    Jan 27, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Just Forget

    I just wanted to let you know that this was so poignant of a poem when I first read it that I marked it down in my blog to remember ...

    Jan 26, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Monster

    Hello! ^_^ I meant to respond to this the first time you posted it, but I got sidetracked. Anyways, I really love the tone of this poem -- I can ...

    Jan 26, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: memories

    This is such a sweet and moving piece -- I really like it. ^_^ My first impressions were only warm and fuzzy feelings inside. Teehee~ Well, of course, except for ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Slurring Between Closed Jaws

    I love writing poems in the heat of emotion -- that's the only time I feel like I ever write anything worthy of even being called poetry. ^_^ It's a ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If Life Gave You...

    ^_^ Hallo! I'm Hannah!! ^_^ Hehe~ I'm no expert on poetry, but I have found that I like reviewing and critiquing it, adding my own suggestions, but you're free to ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: A Love Letter

    Ahahaha. I love it! I absolutely love it~ The first thing I'd have to comment on would be the use of 'P.S' instead of 'Post script'. I mean, you'd think ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Pebbles

    I'd say, Blink, that this is fabulous. I mean, granted, it doesn't have much of a moving message, but the description and imagery is beautiful and majestic. It's especially great ...

    Jan 23, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Abyss

    Hi! I'm Hannah! I really like this piece -- it definitely carries that mythological air to it but seems relevant at the same time. I mean, I can sort of ...

    Jan 23, 2009


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