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Re: Green [Edited, but still open for reviews!]
Ohhhh, why did you distract me from my other reviewing!? Haha, no it's my fault! Can I just say, though, that this was beautiful!? Not the fresh, new-life spring green ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Icy Paths Prologue - A Small Victory
I'm here! I'm here! I'm here just like I promised! ^_^ Here are my comments! 1st Read ; Oooh, this looks to be promising! Right now it seems like I'm ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: The Rogue ~ Prologue
Merry! It seems like you've gotten a lot of critiques on this work already! ^_^ I'll just point out some general things, then, rather than going through it all in ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Gentleman's Club ~ One
Finally got to it, Merry! Sorry about the delay. School, you know...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Bad Boy
Well, I find that when I give critiques, most of it is obviously my opinion! Everything that anyone says, you are free to disregard or to listen to -- it's ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Little Miss Photogenic
^_^ As I'm reading this through for the first time, I just want to point out my delight in finding certain sentences and lines that actually rhyme quite nicely. Hehe, ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: I Could Write a Poem for You
Hallo, Evi! Since you so kindly took the time to look at some of my pieces, I thought I'd critique a few of yours as well. ^_^ First of all, ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: Just Forget
I just wanted to let you know that this was so poignant of a poem when I first read it that I marked it down in my blog to remember ...
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: Monster
Hello! ^_^ I meant to respond to this the first time you posted it, but I got sidetracked. Anyways, I really love the tone of this poem -- I can ...
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: memories
This is such a sweet and moving piece -- I really like it. ^_^ My first impressions were only warm and fuzzy feelings inside. Teehee~ Well, of course, except for ...
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: Slurring Between Closed Jaws
I love writing poems in the heat of emotion -- that's the only time I feel like I ever write anything worthy of even being called poetry. ^_^ It's a ...
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: If Life Gave You...
^_^ Hallo! I'm Hannah!! ^_^ Hehe~ I'm no expert on poetry, but I have found that I like reviewing and critiquing it, adding my own suggestions, but you're free to ...
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: A Love Letter
Ahahaha. I love it! I absolutely love it~ The first thing I'd have to comment on would be the use of 'P.S' instead of 'Post script'. I mean, you'd think ...
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: Pebbles
I'd say, Blink, that this is fabulous. I mean, granted, it doesn't have much of a moving message, but the description and imagery is beautiful and majestic. It's especially great ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Abyss
Hi! I'm Hannah! I really like this piece -- it definitely carries that mythological air to it but seems relevant at the same time. I mean, I can sort of ...
Jan 23, 2009
