Halfbloodcheetah

Hi! First of all welcome to the YWS, my name is Cheetah and I will be your reviewer today! First of all, I love the description you give. It may ...

DeepRoses, hey there! Oh my goodness, there is a lot in this poem and sadly I can also say that this is something I can relate to... and I am ...

Wow. There is a lot of feeling in this poem. I love how you compared memories to books in a library covered in dust. I feel as if I can ...

Cello! This was awesome! I love Doctor Who! Rose is one of the best companions in the world and when her story is put into poetry, It becomes art! This ...

Hey harshita3chaarag! HalfBloodCheetah here for a review for you! As I dove in I liked what I saw in the first paragraph. A step by step breakdown of what was ...

Hello SongMorning! Halfbloodcheetah here to give you a review! When I saw this I was curious so I clicked and then I read it and was amazed! You used scripture ...

Hey Kenzie! Halfbloodcheetah here for a review! I notice that you just joined this month so welcome to YWS! I really like this! The narrator of this sounds like an ...

Hey there ZaBodMoger! Halfbloodcheetah is here for a review! First of I love Christmas stories! At any time of the year! I love this part right here. "But children will ...

Hey Bungiedude! Half-Blood Cheetah here for a review. First of all. This was not bad at all. I think you did a great job! Very interesting concepts here! I really ...

Hello Mardehoward! Halfbloodcheetah cruising by for a review! This was one of the coolest short stories I have ever read. When I saw it had a cliffhanger I was like ...

Hello, Halfbloodcheetah here for a review! Okay, Your writing up there is amazing. For one thing, it reaches past the logicalness and goes straight for the emotions. It was written ...

The Halfbloodcheetah is here! For a review! Hello Firerift24! Welcome to the YWS! I really like this because it shows that you took your time to study the subject you ...

Hey Stegosaurus! It's your friendly neighborhood Cheetah, here to review! I just want to say, that this poem is very accurate. Very interesting way to describe the time that we ...

Hello Stranger! I really like this poem. I especially like that the title tells the basis of the poem before I even read it. I like that the loneliness the ...

Hi LadySpark! I really liked this poem. It was a mix of the ocean and the sand, as if they were talking to you as you sat and listened. It ...