Hadj

Hi there! Hadj trying to get over his fear of reviewing! First things first, welcome to YWS! If you have any questions, let me know! Now, on to business... Nitpicks ...

Hey there! Hadj here trying to recover from my fear of reviewing! First off, I really like this poem! It's short, humerus, and to the point. You're a very funny ...

I have a fear of writing reviews, because I'm absolutely terrible at it. But, you asked for a review, and here it goes. I love the repetition in this poem. ...

Review in the form of a poem: You are A fantastic poet. I am Forever jealous. Teach me Great Poetic Master! Stay Groovy My Strange Friend And let your poetic ...

Nice poem! Filled with emotion, and definitely relatable. I do think that breaking it up into stanzas would make it more legible, and I also would've enjoyed a solid rhythm, ...

Hey there! Hadj here for review day! Wow! Nice work here! I love the suddenly broken lines, it really fits the mood! Nitpick: "pressence" isn't a word :P try "presence" ...

Nice poem! I love the repetition of the title within the poem, and also of the lines beginning with "Who" I feel that it could have used some more poetic ...

Such a beautiful poem! I felt a lot of happiness and beauty at the beginning, but by the end I felt it was saying something along the lines of "Nothing ...

Hey there teammate! Viva la Reviewlution! Nice poem! Short and to the point! I love the repetition and imagery that you used in this! My favorite part: "The love that ...

Hey there teammate! Viva la Reviewlution! Beautiful poem, and really interesting formatting. The first bullet point about "a young child's flashlight" was really fun, and I also enjoyed the repetition

Simple poem, but very cute! :D I love the repetition of My friend, and how the third line is "so pink" to match the previous "so neat" even though so ...

Well written and interesting to read. Though this probably makes you the most awful person in the world ^.^ I find it odd that you write a poem to describe ...

I just wanted to say, that this is a beautiful poem. It really makes a lot of sense, and makes me think. I do think it could use some separation ...

Beautiful poem. I love the way you broke up the lines in such interesting formats :) I had to read this poem several times before making sense of it, and ...

Beautiful poem, and I can really relate to it. It's interesting how we view ourselves in the mirror, versus how people may view us in a photograph, and reading this ...