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Gymnast2801

I'm Gymnast2801 but you can just call me Gymnast!

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Luna part 2

    Hello again! Gymnast2801 here with another review! As before, I will correct while reading and then leave my final thoughts at the end. "So she shut out the sounds And ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Luna

    Hello there! Here with a review for Team Weasely! I will give my overall thought to your poem after I am done because I correct while I read :) Okay, ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Absence

    Hi there! Gymnast2801 here with a review for Team Weasely! I know that this isn't what you would expect from the beginning of a review, but I will add my ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Epiphany

    Hello MilayNire! Gymnast2801 here with a review! I liked the poem, it was short but not quite as simple as someone would expect. I really only had two problems with ...

    May 27, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Prologue

    Hello KittyMew! Gymnast2801 here with a review! This poem was quite enjoyable and a bit mysterious. Although I liked this poem prologue, I found one two things you could work ...

    May 25, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Water

    Hello there! Gymnast2801 here with a review! This poem is very cool and unique! I like it! I also love the factor that you spelled out WATER! Because this was ...

    May 23, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: A Day in the Life of an Insecure Relationship

    Hello! Gymnast2801 here with a review! Woo hoo, this was awesome!! I've never read anything like this before in my life and quite frankly, I compleatly loved it! The character ...

    May 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: An Ocean Of Dreams

    Hello there, Gymnast2801 here with a review! Your poem was so wonderful that I can't even stand it!!! I loved it so much and the rhyming, word choice and especially ...

    May 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: The Best Part Of Me

    Hi! Gymnast2801 here for a review! This was Avery interesting poem but overall it was good. There where a few errors so let's get to it! "My hand is big ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Echo

    Hello, Gymnast2801 stopping by for a review! I liked this poem and it was really well written! There when a few parts that weren't so clear...but overall, great job! Now ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Writer

    Hello, Gymanst2801 here with a review! I really liked this poem, it's short and simple but there where still a few things that could use some correction: "She sat with ...

    May 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Free

    Hi, Gymnast2801 here with a review! I liked your poem, it told a very sad beginning for this person but the end turned out well. It reminds me of some ...

    May 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: I Planted a Seed

    Hi, Gymnast2801 here with a review! First off, this poem is really good! I like how you referred to a garden as sort of the growing of the mind. I ...

    May 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Broken Home

    Hi! Gymnast2801 here for a review! I like your poem, it defiantly expresses the way the person is feeling. There where a couple grammar errors so I'll get onto that: ...

    May 2, 2016
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Walking Through the Forest

    Hi again! Gymanst2801 here for a review! First off, this is a really cool poem! I like how it's short but simple and somehow, it still seems to describe everything ...

    May 1, 2016


I want to shake off the dust of this one-horse town. I want to explore the world. I want to watch TV in a different time zone. I want to visit strange, exotic malls...I want to live, Marge! Won't you let me live?
— Homer Simpson