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Re: Luna part 2
Hello again! Gymnast2801 here with another review! As before, I will correct while reading and then leave my final thoughts at the end. "So she shut out the sounds And ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Luna
Hello there! Here with a review for Team Weasely! I will give my overall thought to your poem after I am done because I correct while I read :) Okay, ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Absence
Hi there! Gymnast2801 here with a review for Team Weasely! I know that this isn't what you would expect from the beginning of a review, but I will add my ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Epiphany
Hello MilayNire! Gymnast2801 here with a review! I liked the poem, it was short but not quite as simple as someone would expect. I really only had two problems with ...
May 27, 2016 -
Re: Prologue
Hello KittyMew! Gymnast2801 here with a review! This poem was quite enjoyable and a bit mysterious. Although I liked this poem prologue, I found one two things you could work ...
May 25, 2016 -
Re: Water
Hello there! Gymnast2801 here with a review! This poem is very cool and unique! I like it! I also love the factor that you spelled out WATER! Because this was ...
May 23, 2016 -
Re: A Day in the Life of an Insecure Relationship
Hello! Gymnast2801 here with a review! Woo hoo, this was awesome!! I've never read anything like this before in my life and quite frankly, I compleatly loved it! The character ...
May 18, 2016 -
Re: An Ocean Of Dreams
Hello there, Gymnast2801 here with a review! Your poem was so wonderful that I can't even stand it!!! I loved it so much and the rhyming, word choice and especially ...
May 16, 2016 -
Re: The Best Part Of Me
Hi! Gymnast2801 here for a review! This was Avery interesting poem but overall it was good. There where a few errors so let's get to it! "My hand is big ...
May 12, 2016 -
Re: Echo
Hello, Gymnast2801 stopping by for a review! I liked this poem and it was really well written! There when a few parts that weren't so clear...but overall, great job! Now ...
May 12, 2016 -
Re: The Writer
Hello, Gymanst2801 here with a review! I really liked this poem, it's short and simple but there where still a few things that could use some correction: "She sat with ...
May 9, 2016 -
Re: Free
Hi, Gymnast2801 here with a review! I liked your poem, it told a very sad beginning for this person but the end turned out well. It reminds me of some ...
May 9, 2016 -
Re: I Planted a Seed
Hi, Gymnast2801 here with a review! First off, this poem is really good! I like how you referred to a garden as sort of the growing of the mind. I ...
May 6, 2016 -
Re: Broken Home
Hi! Gymnast2801 here for a review! I like your poem, it defiantly expresses the way the person is feeling. There where a couple grammar errors so I'll get onto that: ...
May 2, 2016 -
Re: Walking Through the Forest
Hi again! Gymanst2801 here for a review! First off, this is a really cool poem! I like how it's short but simple and somehow, it still seems to describe everything ...
May 1, 2016
