Gwenevire

Wow. That really blew me away! Nice work. I am still dazed! ~ Gwen

Cute! I like it! I would suggest going over it again and trying not to use the same words over again in the same paragraph. Other than that its funny! ...

Thanks! :D

I like it!

Its interesting. But your play is how would you say... Better!

I really find that interesting. It draws my attention... Good work! :D

Thanks. I know its called Gull...I just felt like putting se gull!

That's really nice! You just made one spelling error. You put worm-out moccasins. Just put an N in the place of the M in worm

I really like that. It paints a really nice picture in my head. Good job! :D ~ Gwen

Thanks for your suggestions...But I like the way it does not rhyme. Its like a rose. Sharp etc.

Thanks! The wolf was evil because I was feeling evil and it was halloween.

It nice...I but you should put more description into the fire and the boy etc. You have allot of dialogue and not enough explanations. And in the first little bit ...

I really like it! But its hard to understand is it about war?

Thanks...I really hope that this does not happen to me! If it did I would probably get so depressed.

Thanks..I can't make any changes know I have just snuck on! :P