My heart is filled with love
For he is my crush
It is obvious but concealed
For that is me
He will never know
Neither will I
My heart is torn in two
For he loves another girl
So I lie here heartbroken...
My life is a mess
I was in love
But now I remain unloved
He flirts with my friends and completely ignores me
As the moments pass by my eyes begin to sting
For icy tear role down my cheeks
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Thanks...I really hope that this does not happen to me! If it did I would probably get so depressed.
Not bad; it's rough but full of emotion...beautiful but jagged.
Since I'm no poetry expert, I won't be able to give you a good review