Gwenevire

Thank you :D

Its really short but good...

Thanks :D

Wow that was touching... But all lives are taken away. But held captive :( By the dreaded SCHOOL! ~ Gwen

Grate work! :D

That's what I am here for :D I guess...

Its interesting. But generally you don't call boys hoe's... That's my way of seeing things. Good job :D ~ Gwen

Thank you! I shall go and review some of your work Kim!

Thanks... Its not the beginning of my book. Its just a little bit. The beginning is called Sacred. You should cheque it out.

That's is a really grate peace of work! Bravo! Its very true and I can relate to it! Nice work! ~ Gwen

Its makes me think! Nice! Its short but simple and I can tell you put allot of thinking into it! Good work! ~ Gwen

I like it! It got a little confusing at the end... So I would suggest that you review it! :D ~ Gwen

Very nice! You are grate at poetry! ~ Gwen

Nice... I don't do much poetry so I can't crit it... But good job! :D

Its art! I tell you! Its art!