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Test #2

by Nate


The frog jumped over the moon.


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JoyDark says...



Then the cat met the fiddle and swooned.
A spoon and a dish
Made love with a fish...
Should I stop taking these meds soon?




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EverLight says...



And the cow ran away with a boom.




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Prokaryote says...



God, Nate is so old.

We're all so old.




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DoormanDan says...



Beautiful. XD




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Wow




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Nate says...



Test commenting




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you guys are the most sarcastic people I have ever met




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Firestarter wrote a review...



Test test test test.




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Nate says...



Okay, thanks Elinor and Skins.

Jacob: I loathe you.




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Sins says...



Table.

That's my reply. :smt001




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Jacob24 says...



Sure.




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Elinor says...



:D




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Nate says...



Could a few people reply to this? I'm testing out the notifications area and need to test the reviews section.

If you do reply, please keep it VERY short. Don't want it counting as a review :)




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chocoholic says...



That was... amazing! Absolutely amazing! Screw JK Rowling, you're the most amazing writer the world has seen!




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kioneslayer says...



Fantasic! ^^ But was it a poison dart frog? Was he intending to kill the moon and make plumit into the earth?

D;= I must know!




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Gwenevire says...



Its art! I tell you! Its art!




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Thu Nov 08, 2007 9:58 pm
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Twit says...



Wow.

I am awed by the simplicity and subtleness of this poem's point, how well the meaning is hidden among the richness of the imagery and how brilliantly you avoided turning this poem into a cliche.




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Leja says...



^ Please! I can't take the suspense!




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Via says...



With a fiddle or a wooden spoon?




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Sumi H. Inkblot says...



I think...

I think I'm going to start crying at how well the author's emotions were portrayed.




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Rydia says...



Great poem. Very... deep.




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Someguy says...



It was funny...




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Chevy says...



And I witnessed it.





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