Gwenevire

Wow. Thanks you two :D

Thanks :D

Thanks for ll your help. But tis was a crap story XD

Nice work. It has allot of meaning stuffed into those four lines. Very nice work! -Keep writing! Genevieve ^-^

Wow. That was beautiful =] Good work. I love how it made me think about all that we can do without even trying and when we do amazing things happen. ...

Okay... But are my comments helping at all?

Okay. That's clears things up! Thanks :D

No problem I enjoy reading this! :D

Oh yes one last thing... Maybe you should explain how she thinks about dragons a little more... Like does she believe in them or not etc. SeraphTree Other than that... ...

Well... I can tell that you rushed that. You have to take more time. You need to jazz it up a bit. Its a really bland now. Maybe she could ...

MIsa like-ish... I think you should keep on going. Its kinda short You said: you see the assignment was for history and was suppost to be short. Oh... Well its ...

Thanks! :D It kinda sucked but I might find a place to enter it into my story. I will go over it and edit all my errors soon. I just ...

Nice :D I think you should explain your surroundings a little more!

Thanks y'all! I don't really think it is good either... I was really sad. You know how sometimes when you are pissed or sad crap just flows out you like ...

Well... Thats the thing Ayra! I based Rachel on you! :D Well... us I guess! I will continue soon!