Published November 27, 2007
There once was a man called Bothwell,
he was not very thoughtful,
he hung two people,
not in the steeple,
for them it did not end well.
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thanks and I hope you enjoy it.
Ok, I will! xD
ummm...thanks!
I do kinda enjoy people being hanged too, to read of course!
if you want more of my hangings read One without fear chapter 2!
Oh, it was supposed to be short.
In that case, Kudos!
It was cool...and for some morbid reason, I enjoy reading about people being hanged.
thanks! I thought it was funny too, but when my teacher showed as a video about what happened it made me sad, back then if you where thought to be a cattle rustler then you could be hanged illegaly!
this all happened in Wyoming before proper law was brought.
poor Kate and her husband, evil bothwell!
anyways thanks for the comment!
HAHAHA!
THAT WAS HILARIOUS!
Awesome job. I just don't like the last rhyme with the "well".
So aweome job.
thanks. it was my 1st lymeric. not bad huh?
This is a limerick, right? Well, it's pretty good, but "Bothwell" and "thoughtful" don't really go, and the last line was too long. But it was a good original idea for a poem! ^_^
you see my teach told us to use aabba form and well I tried.
I got a 17/20 for a grade. Not to bad.
MIsa like-ish...
I think you should keep on going. Its kinda short
You said:
you see the assignment was for history and was suppost to be short.
Oh...
Well its nice!
you see the assignment was for history and was suppost to be short.
^_^
Well, that was...interesting...!
It's a little short, so I can't give you an in-depth review.
However, the rhyming near the end sounds quite bizarre...
Well,
Cheers to random poem about people being hanged,
Narf,
-Ayra