Published November 28, 2007
Whose games were empires
And whose stakes were thrones,
Whose table earth-
Whose dice were human bones.
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Nice work.
It has allot of meaning stuffed into those four lines.
Very nice work!
-Keep writing!
Genevieve
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I always love four-line poetry... but the only reason I knew what it was about was because of the title... not sure if you wanted it that way, if so; good job!!!
Ok the line "whose table earth-", that line was a bit aukward, try rephasing it or something.
Overall, great job!!