Published October 31, 2007
The sky darkens as rain filled clouds slowly drift over the blazing moon.
Lightning strikes and lights up the forest sending shivers of fear down your spine.
A fain howl splits the night in two. Approaching steps race behind you...You screech in agony and run for your life...But it is soon over as the lightning strikes.
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Thank you
I might just consider doing that!
its great, in my opinion.
i think you could expand on it a little.
possibly write a sequel.
but great i loved it
it doesnt suck gwen, i actually like it. you put alot in a short space. give your self some credit, i have yet to read anything of yours that sucked lol.
kimi
Thanks
Yes I guess its a knd of poem
Thanks again!
Genevieve
I quite like it. I fond it entertaining.
Yeah, I would definitely say it is a poem! There not much I can say. It's
kinda short. XD
-- M.B.Author
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It has great imagery. i like it. it doesnt suck. maybe you know you could do better but as far as my opinion goes i think it's good!
It sucks...
I just read it over again and it totally sucks! XD
Thanks!
Hehee, it's pretty much a poem.
*Moved to Other Poetry*