GryphonFledgling

I loved the present tense in this piece. It had such a minimal impact that I didn't even notice until my second time reading, and yet it added a lot ...

Lips? Is this poem about lips, standing in for two characters in... a one-night stand? Like the speaker is a neglected, lonely person, and the fish are another character who ...

Hey hi! Okay, first things first: The block of text here is actually kind of hard to read. It looks intimidating and is just a strain on the eyes. A ...

(Retrieved from underground library two years after the Kellan Manor’s incineration) (Letter sent: January 16, 1638) (Letter terminated at receiver’s death. Lady Kellan’s death recorded January

'allo, 'allo. I know I'm a latecomer here, so I'll try to avoid repeating anything people have already said unless it bears repeating. Okay, my first comment is actually on ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! Okay, first off: I loved the description of the room. It was solemn and sad, setting the mood wonderfully. its self Do you mean "itself"? ...

I loved this book. The sequels were okay, but they were a bit of a different animal from the original. I loves me the Orson Scott Card. Not always the ...

Wow. This is honestly not the first thing that jumps into my head when I hear "secret life of window washer", but you really made it believable. I loves it. ...

Wow. As wacky and almost nonsensical as this piece was, it really hit home with me. Something about it was just so raw and vulnerable. Really a great piece. The ...

I loved this. It was so eccentric and frustrated, and yet entirely in earnest. It was disjointed, yet the emotion comes across so clearly. yet I’ve got MY Ego still, ...

First of all, I want to see what happens from here on in. It's a bit short and without resolution as a stand-alone piece, but if it were to be ...

Let me just start off by saying that your title hooked me. I don't know what it was, but for some reason, seeing a story called "The Janitors" in Action/Adventure ...

Shucks... Why must you give me such marvelous work that has so little for me to critique? One thing I noticed was the fact that she's awake this whole time. ...

Ah, I liked the double standard at the end. Very nice observation on people in general. I noticed some grammatical nitpicks. I'll insert my corrections in bold. What’s the matter ...

The story started out kind of slowly, but I stuck with it because I was pretty much wondering what was wrong with Cindy Seven until the end when she started ...