Griffinkeeper

I think the Harry Potter fans aren't going to let you bring back Snape without one heck of an explanation. J.K. Rowling killed him, in no uncertain terms. Otherwise they'd ...

Acception is a very hard thing to achieve these days. Acception isn't a word. You might consider rephrasing it, either "Acceptance is..." or "To be accepted is..." That is the ...

Hey Calla, You should really review more often. Here is one for you. First off, the formatting is really bad. It's difficult to follow the story. You might consider reformatting ...

I rather like this poem. It develops well, unlike other poems which try to do everything at once. Things get a little bit wonky toward the fourth and fifth sections. ...

This was all very boring. Let's take a look at our protagonist. We have an eleven year old girl, who is an expert archer, can read and manipulate minds, and ...

Hey Mimiko! Welcome to YWS. His golden eyes sparkle as the light of the morning star graces them with its brightness. His sandy blond hair was cleanly combed away from ...

...the other officers moved in vein attempt to grab the boy... Should be "vain." Hannah attempted a smile but failed. She couldn't bring herself to do it. A smile seemed ...

Let me tell you about a concept commonly believed, not definitely true, but probably true. Some say this idea is absurd and irreverent. Others say that it is pure genius. ...

That was pretty disturbing to read. Normally, when satire is written, it has humorous aspects to it. There was way too little of it here. Exaggeration is also a key ...

I don't quite understand what I just read, but I do know it is well written. The problem is that the stories don't seem to be connected in any meaningful ...

Hey Blakey, here is a review. Charlie didn't know that the reckless mistake he committed in the past week would thwart him from achieving the goal of his life. Weak ...

I ran away that night and never looked back, I had to save myself, I wouldn’t die for anyone even if it was my best friend but now I wish ...

Welcome to YWS Katz! This is a very short piece, which can limit how much I can say about it. He was like one of those old guys in the ...

Wow, what a soppy romance story. There are a few things that bug me about it. First off: Although she loved Derek, she could never tell him because she was ...

Oh god. You posted twelve chapters, simultaneously? How in God's name do you expect us to write a constructive review for all of these in one sitting? It's insane. So ...