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Re: The Waiting Game
Hi The Learning Writer, I am here to give you a review on your short story- "The Waiting Game". I have to admit that you pulled me into the story ...
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: Glory's Story
Hello, I'm here to give you a review on your poem "Glory's Story". It is not a bad poem. A bit on a longer side but it works with the ...
Aug 27, 2015 -
Re: T
Hi, I'm Tulip and I'm here to give you a review on your short story. If this isn't the best review it'd be because I haven't been on here for ...
Aug 27, 2015 -
Re: We're all good Americans.
Hello, Tulip here to review your poem! It is a very interesting poem, and it's format is different. Not different in a bad way though. It's a very god thing ...
Jun 9, 2015 -
Re: My Guardian Angel Once Walked Upon The Earth
I can feel the heartbreak in this as I read it. One of my suggestions is that you shorten this down a little bit. Though there is nothing wrong with ...
May 14, 2015 -
Re: The War of the Twelve Crusaders - Premonition Part 1
Hello, I am going to be reviewing your first chapter tonight. First thing I am going to say is that you don't have to mention that it is was fifteen ...
May 14, 2015 -
Re: Saturday Sip
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review on your short story. This ran a bit long, but I feel as if the length helped it. Though, it may not ...
May 14, 2015 -
Re: .
Good morning! Tulip here to give you a review on your prologue of Without Darkness . Okay, so this may be scatterbrained but that is how I review sometimes. So ...
May 5, 2015 -
Re: The Real You
Hi, GreenTulip here to give you a review on your poem. I am willing to say that this is a good poem, but the wording you choose made it difficult ...
Apr 22, 2015 -
Re: Telephone Lines
Hello, Tulip here to give you a review on your poem, Telephone Lines . Now, I don't know what I expected to see when I clicked upon it in the ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Furnace
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review on your work. Okay, to keep myself organized and to help you understand my randomness, I am trying out a new review ...
Apr 16, 2015 -
Re: My Willow Tree
Hi Tulip here to give you a review. This poem is well written. Not to long but not too short. I loved this poem for the simple fact that you ...
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: Breathe Awesomeness!
Hi Tulip here to give you a review. I'm not even sure who you are exactly but I can tell you this- you are the first review I have done ...
Mar 25, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 8.1 Avery
I'm back for more Timmy! Now, this one and the other half of this shall be done before I go to bed, unless I get distracted by Doctor Who which ...
Dec 26, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 7.2 Avery
Hiya Timmy. Tulip here to give you a review on the rest of the chapter 7. (You have totally got further in your book than I have mine xD.) Okay, ...
Dec 26, 2014