GreenTulip

It is a good, but the story went by too fast and it lost meaning. The fact it went from telling a story to Eliza dieing, it is simply to ...

I have a single word that can be used to describe this: Amazing. I haven't seen Tangled yet so I don't know a lot about Rapunzel- and I don't know ...

Nice twist at the end, I say. it could have been describing many things, but a used car salesman. It is a amazing poem that is well written. I didn't ...

Hi, GreenTulip here for a review, though I don't know how long it will be with the length of hte poem. Okay first thing's first- it is well written, with ...

This is a powerful work- with a strong emotional pull into it. From the never ending echo of "Endless Torment" that drives the person insane, it is well done. I ...

Okay...this is good. I have to adress a few issues hre though. 1. You use no ending punctuation. This makes finding the end of each idea hard. Without end punctuation, ...

Hi, so this is how I am going to do this....I am giong to put your poem down here, but It will be how I think it should be. This ...

I feel like some of this may go to fast. Other than that, this may need some editing. I am going to give you some tips on how you can ...

Long, but it is good. This is good, but what is the story behind you writing this? This is amazing well written, but even if it's lyrics/poetry- punctuation never hurts, ...

Wow, this is powerful for a prologue, but it is making me want to read the rest of it. It is well written, but I really don't have anything to ...

Hiya, just here to leave a friendly review. This is amazing. It is one of the funniest things that i have read today. I am glad that I read this, ...

Hello, GreenTulip is here to leave a review for you. So as I reading, it got to the point I HAD to stop reading, because of the sentence structure. The ...

You already know that i love Annalise, and I forgot how memorable she is. She is loveable in all aspects. I love how she can turn a single event into ...

This is very intersting at the most. I love how you described how the world changed, but I felt like you could have explained why the world as we know ...

Wow, this is well done. It shows how much hatred of one, (I think it said your Mother in your description), can lead to tears, which leads to regret. It ...