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  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: Let Rain Fall

    Hiya there! Reppin da west!!! Anywayss, here's a review for you. So, I really like the idea of this poem, and I enjoyed the way you used the metaphor of ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Three AM

    Wow. This is really a touching piece. It makes ya think about how some ppl are forced to live these days. I won't be reviewing this based on grammar or ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, Other Re: Just how i feel about this.....

    Woah...uh, I was gonna review this. But I just like..woah. First off, I'm sorry to hear about ur relationship with your dad. I guess I could say I've been this ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: .

    Hi there. Review for ya. #westside I really enjoyed the narrative here and i've got ask, do you have continuations of this series?? I'd love to keep reading. Anyways, this ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Stuart's Anguish

    Hi there! GL24 reppin dat west side for ya! *clears throat* Now, I think the basic idea of this story is very intriguing, and I enjoyed the idea of what ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology Re: Demi Paradise

    Wow. Okay. Well I've got to start off with a small disclaimer: I didn't read your previous story, but this still works quite nicely as a stand alone piece. Also, ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Carved

    Wow okay. Here I am to review for ya. I absolutely love what you've done here. Very nice job. From a personal perspective, I've been in a similar situation before...minus ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Tug of War

    Wow. Very nice piece ya got here! I love this. Review for you. I especially like your use of the "rabid dog" metaphor, with you as "the slab of meat." ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Autumn in an Oaken Dell

    Ooh cool imagery here. Review for ya. I don't read the other reviews and comments so my apologies if I repeat anything. First off, I really like this poem. It ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Way You Say My Name

    Hey there! Nice job with this one. Here's a review for you. I really like the narrative voice in this poem as well as the narrators point of view and ...

    Oct 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: "It's Fine"

    Wooh. Nice job. Review l for you. And just as as disclaimer I didn't bother to read the previous reviews and comments so my bad if I repeat anything that's ...

    Oct 25, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Find Judy

    Hey there. Review for you. I like the way this essay unfolds. It's really cute. Gives a whole new meaning to "simplicity=greatness." We all remember a time when we, too, ...

    Oct 3, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Trapped Between Your Pages

    Hey there. Review for you. :) I really enjoyed reading this poem, just because of the way you conveyed the narrator's emotions and thoughts about the complicated relationship they are ...

    Oct 3, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happiness

    Hey there. I said I'd review some of your stuff, so here we go! :) I'm really interested to read ur romance story, as that's like my favorite genre, but ...

    Oct 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: What day is it?

    Hahaha. Nice first poem here. I'll be glad to give you a review here. Anyways, I thought this was really cute. Nice way to start off! I could actually feel ...

    Sep 30, 2013


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