GreenEyes

This is amazing, I really wish I could have written something like this, obviously this isn't really a review i'm writing here, but i just wanted to say how much ...

I really like this poem, and I just have a few wee things to say! Firstly; It’s cold outside , a frigid night. I can be a bit of a ...

Hey, this is a really good piece of writing, and I've just got a few things to point out, but on whole I really liked it! It was the most ...

First of all, I really like this, took me a while to read, which is probably why it's got so few reviews. Secondly; The short sentances can help get the ...

I really love this piece and I've got a few pieces of criticism! Firstly; please remember to capitalise the beginnings of lines! It makes the thing on whole easier to ...

This is a really good introduction to a story, it's obviously short, so a wee bit harder to review, but I'll do my best! First of all I think that ...

I like the sentiment in this poem, I've only got one criticism; Which is which? How many? How bright? I'm not sure the phrase how bright is entirely relevant, because ...

OK, I honestly LOVE this poem! I can really relate to the idea behind it! I've only got one criticism which is I think you use the word 'child' too ...

I think this is a really nice little poem :) I've only got one point really; We're missing kindness, you used to give us. Not completely sure what this line ...

This is really good, not much to say apart from this little bit; My friends go and stab my back, I'm not sure about this line, the rest of the ...

People say you have to look a certain way T o fit in, t he only problem with that is, I never asked for your opinion :) I've not really ...

h Walking to Tec seemed longer today, was it because I was thinking of him? His liquid purple and blue eyes, his shaggy fair hair, just thinking of him gave ...

This is a really touching piece of writing. It's obviously very personal and I understand that it must be hard to write about something like that. It is an almost ...

Hi Matt, I think this is really good. The lack of structure is effective but I think that it could use a tiny bit more form, but that is just ...