Gravity

I love this. The way you wrote this piece is actually making me question if you've experienced this at all. I know you probably wouldn't be on this site if ...

This. Is. Beautiful. I can definitely relate to you. I think I a love somebody. But he has a girlfriend, and we're close friends. We've been friends for about a ...

This is intense, and your "hidden meaning" is not so hidden. So you're Jonathan, hmm? Well let me tell you something, Jonathan. You are not a sociopath. Your definition of ...

I loved this poem. I'm a majestic Icicle, however, I liked this. I definitely thought this piece applies to most writers. So bravo. Your rhythm and flow were nice, and ...

Genius. I liked how you took a children's book and made it so meaningful. Personally, I've not read the book, nor have I seen the movie. I thought this poem ...

Okay. So I like what you've got here. It's short, sweet and very much to the point. I only knew you were writing this about trees because I saw your ...

HAHAHAHAHA! I just saw your previous post. I love lists. Lists are great. Omg I am dying I told you, you could be a great writer. Now write a short ...

Not liking this. Conversational Pieces are great, except for when you use them to bag on yourself. I've not read anything you've tried to write, and I'm not going to ...

Alright I think this was very well written, but the concept did not make sense. I see what you were trying to do with the gaming thing, but your story ...

I liked your concept. I'm going to warn you, this review is going to be fairly harsh. Punctuation wise, this was poorly written. You did well on everything else. Okay ...

I really loved this piece because it's Christian and it has lyrics. I like the repetitiveness of the "I am free, I am free." The only thing I don't like ...

Okay, so I told you earlier that fantasy isn't my thing. But I'm always willing to try new things. Except drugs. That's not good. Anyway, I felt like I was ...

I really like what you have going on here. And if I'm not mistaken, those three words are "I love you"? I love the imagery you use, especially about the ...

This was beautiful. I don't think I've ever read a poem that expresses the feelings of not just me, but also the author. I can see the passion in your ...

I'm going to do my best to not be biased. I am Christian, and I don't appreciate your slander of my belief. I don't believe in Christianity as a religion, ...