GrapeNerd

Okay, I totally agree with you on most of these, but there were just a few parts which had shake my head. Just a few. I'm too lazy to write ...

Hello, here I am to write a review! Okay, first I'd like to tell you that your poem was absolutely amazing and I love it! There were no flaws that ...

Hello, and welcome to YWS! Okay, first, I love the concept of your plot. It's very creative! I love the title, too. It was very enticing. I like how you ...

Hi! Okay, first off, this piece was truly amazing! I love the concept of your poem, the boy is in love with the girl, but the girl is in love ...

Wow, this piece was quite amazing. One thing, though, is the lack of punctuation. I'm not sure if it was supposed to be this way or not. Also, I love ...

Well, this is certainly a wonderful piece of literary work! I love the dream/fantasy-like feel to it. As of now, I'm not entirely certain as to what this would be ...

This is actually very interesting, as for the whole Leprechaun (is that how you spell it?) it was very clever. I actually thought that it would be more of an ...

YES! Finally, chapter three! I've been waiting so long for this! Okay, reviewing time! I especially love this chapter it's, like, amazing! I find it very cute how they're both ...

Hello! I'm here to review your poem! so first off, I really like the concept of this poem, I could just feel the raw emotion you are portraying. I really ...

Hello! I really love this poem, however there were some things that needed to be edited. I don't think the bold font is necessary, but it's fine just the way ...

Hello! This was wonderful and I shall review your story. Oh My GOODNESS! This was so amazing! I love how you made it steampunk and stuff, though I do think ...

Hello, this is a review if you haven't figured it out yet. :P For starters, this was very good, I did not detect any errors. Though, I do think you ...

Hello .__. Firstly, I really love the message that you are conveying here, but I'm quite curious. Is this fictional or not? There were some things that you left out, ...

Hello, this is a review! So, I do think that this is quite brilliant! I love how you succeeded into turning this a bit emo, but did not turn it ...

The only problem I had with this poem was it's format. I strongly suggest that you cut this into smaller parts. Some of your capitalization need to be edited to. ...