Gracie

Hi there I have to admit that part of me read this simply because it has my name in it, but I did really enjoy it. I like your use ...

Hi there I really like this. I love the story. The opening line draws me in completely. And I like how it is a bit of a mystery. What girl ...

Hi there I like this. Just a simple, sweet poem about a cupcake, nothing more nothing less. I like the structure and the flow of it, although I think making ...

Hi there. This is a very interesting, if not odd poem. It has a well formed structure, but I don't the idea holds much merit. I think it needs a ...

Hi there. Great, fantastic. I wish I could find a few more words for this. I just tell you what I love about it. Firstly, your opening sentence makes it ...

Hello there I really love this. I to know what it's like not to be a massive fan of mathematics, so this is definitely relatable. I love poems that make ...

Hi there This is very interesting and has a lot of potential, but needs some work. Firstly, I think it goes on about four stanzas longer than it needs to. ...

Hi there. Wow. Really well done. If the subject was any less compelling, I would have called the form repetive. But here I think it really works. For me it ...

Very nice. As you probably already know, love poems are done very often and can often feel clichéd and repetitive. However this has a twist or a different format. I ...

Hi there. I like this. For some reason I keep imagining this as a song being sung by Owl City. It just has that very descriptive feel to it. I ...

Wow this is great Although I love creativity and opinion, I have a real soft spot for facts. So combining both of them was just great. I don’t have a ...

Hi there This is really good. It's very wistful and sweet love poem. But I do think that there are a few clichés in here which is a easy mistake ...

This has potential, but needs some work. Firstly, I recommend giving it an actual title, simply because thre are quite a few works on this site alone. Secondly, I think ...

Hi there This is the second piece of yours I've reviewed and I'm really loving all of your poetry. My favourite part of this poem is your last stanza "Walk ...

This is fantastic! There are so many things I love about this I'm just going to have to make a list. 1. Your dialogue is great. Many writers have difficulty ...