In a minute

Hey!
I really liked this poem! It was different than any other kind of poem I have ever read before. It was sweet how you used statistics to make up every line (well pretty much every line). While it could use a few tweaks, I agree with the one's stated by DelanieHeart, it was still written very well!

Keep it up, I hope to read more of your poems

-Jessa

I really liked this poem... Actually, it's different than what I've ever read before, so I found it interesting... I especially liked the facts. Altogether, a good read...

I love this poem. It's the first time I've read a factual poem like this. I thought it was pretty good. Keep writing!

Wow this is great

Although I love creativity and opinion, I have a real soft spot for facts.
So combining both of them was just great.

I don’t have a lot of patience for poetry with a lot of adjectives and description, because It can just feel like fluff.
I love how all the sentences are short, punchy and hard hitting.

Yes, it is a bit brief, because the rest of the things I could find were stupid money facts...

When the clock hits two
I can tell you This line seems short compared to the first one...
250 babies breath their first
113 will starve and thirst I dunno if you can "thirst", it sounds in the wrong context
3 are shot on U.S. land
2 are thrown from car to sand
523 is what Opera makes Opera... What do you mean what they make? Like Oprah Winfrey or like the Phantom of the Opera?
5 times the Earth’s ground quakes Awkward wording, it doesn't flow right into each other
360 flashes light the earth
15 defects began at birth
As you see
there is a ton
Before the minute hand
Hits the one. Love >3

This was kind of cool to read. I liked it. It seemed very brief though, so I'm sorry if my review doesn't really help any. Just wanted to say great job This is pretty different.