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Re: Clowie
Hey, TheLeakyPen! It's Golden, here with a review! Congratulations on being brave enough to put your work out there! I'm a bit nitpicky, so I may dive into that first ...
Feb 23, 2017 -
Re: Prologue: The Reliquary (Edited)
Heya, Jimss! It's-a me, Quill! I know you've got more than enough reviews here, but I'm going to read it anyway (in order to gain further insight and not miss ...
Feb 23, 2017 -
Re: No...
Hey Squirtlepowiee! No, the speaker of this poem may not die! Monday is truly terrible, but not as terrible as not getting to see plants or the sunrise in the ...
Feb 23, 2017 -
Re: Deleted 78
Lumi, this is great. A story within a poem. It's short, yet somehow long. It expresses everything perfectly, and doesn't feel like it's stretching, reaching, or waiting for something else. ...
Feb 23, 2017 -
Re: Unnamed Until Further Notice
Hey LenaRose! It's Quill, here to throw you a quick review! I can, occasionally, be quite nitpicky, but everything I ever do is always to build you up as a ...
Feb 23, 2017 -
Re: Where Do We Go From Here?
Hey sophiereichelt! It's Quill here, with a quick review. Congratulations on having the courage to put your work out there! I'm very nitpicky, so I thought we could slide into ...
Feb 21, 2017 -
Re: time
Hey ElizabethLovelace! It's Quill here, with a quick review! Please note that I'm not hugely proficient in poetry, so take everything with a grain of salt. This is great! I ...
Feb 21, 2017 -
Re: Food Whispers
Hey writervid! It's Quill, here for a review! First off, I want to say that there was something so comical about your poem. While reading it, both my husband and ...
Feb 21, 2017 -
Re: Junior High Interactions
Hi Barry! It's Golden here, with your review. I absolutely love this work. Short, simple, to the point, but alluring in a way. It really painted a scene, and I ...
Feb 21, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 1.1
Hey, Blue! It's Gold! (I'll never get sick of this, hah!) Here with a review! I'm not sure if I commented on your prologue, but I did read it. With ...
Feb 21, 2017 -
Re: Forearm Fractures
Hey Silver! It's Gold! (Haha!) I hope all is well with you. Please forgive my potential blunders, as I am not a huge reader of poetry. I enjoyed your piece ...
Feb 20, 2017 -
Re: Equivalent Worlds - Prologue
Hey Scarlett! It's Quill here with a review. I tend to be nitpicky, so let's dive into that and I'll comment on finer elements in a bit. According to every ...
Feb 20, 2017 -
Re: Children of the Pyramid: Chapter 1; Shujaa (Edited)
Hey Jimss! It is Golden here, for a review! Now, unless I am mistaken, this is the first chapter with no prologue or anything. If there is something I'm missing, ...
Feb 20, 2017 -
Re: Goodbye
Hey Sheyren, it's Zly here for a review! She hadn't been able to find a job, and often complained that people were reluctant to hire someone like her, because of ...
Jan 28, 2017 -
Re: Magnetized
Hey there! It's Zly here, for a review. I'm not a huge poetry writer or editor, so keep that in mind for this review! I really enjoyed this piece. I ...
Jan 28, 2017
