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  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Clowie

    Hey, TheLeakyPen! It's Golden, here with a review! Congratulations on being brave enough to put your work out there! I'm a bit nitpicky, so I may dive into that first ...

    Feb 23, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Action / Adventure Re: Prologue: The Reliquary (Edited)

    Heya, Jimss! It's-a me, Quill! I know you've got more than enough reviews here, but I'm going to read it anyway (in order to gain further insight and not miss ...

    Feb 23, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Literature Re: No...

    Hey Squirtlepowiee! No, the speaker of this poem may not die! Monday is truly terrible, but not as terrible as not getting to see plants or the sunrise in the ...

    Feb 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Deleted 78

    Lumi, this is great. A story within a poem. It's short, yet somehow long. It expresses everything perfectly, and doesn't feel like it's stretching, reaching, or waiting for something else. ...

    Feb 23, 2017
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology Re: Unnamed Until Further Notice

    Hey LenaRose! It's Quill, here to throw you a quick review! I can, occasionally, be quite nitpicky, but everything I ever do is always to build you up as a ...

    Feb 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Where Do We Go From Here?

    Hey sophiereichelt! It's Quill here, with a quick review. Congratulations on having the courage to put your work out there! I'm very nitpicky, so I thought we could slide into ...

    Feb 21, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: time

    Hey ElizabethLovelace! It's Quill here, with a quick review! Please note that I'm not hugely proficient in poetry, so take everything with a grain of salt. This is great! I ...

    Feb 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Food Whispers

    Hey writervid! It's Quill, here for a review! First off, I want to say that there was something so comical about your poem. While reading it, both my husband and ...

    Feb 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Junior High Interactions

    Hi Barry! It's Golden here, with your review. I absolutely love this work. Short, simple, to the point, but alluring in a way. It really painted a scene, and I ...

    Feb 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 1.1

    Hey, Blue! It's Gold! (I'll never get sick of this, hah!) Here with a review! I'm not sure if I commented on your prologue, but I did read it. With ...

    Feb 21, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Forearm Fractures

    Hey Silver! It's Gold! (Haha!) I hope all is well with you. Please forgive my potential blunders, as I am not a huge reader of poetry. I enjoyed your piece ...

    Feb 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Equivalent Worlds - Prologue

    Hey Scarlett! It's Quill here with a review. I tend to be nitpicky, so let's dive into that and I'll comment on finer elements in a bit. According to every ...

    Feb 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Children of the Pyramid: Chapter 1; Shujaa (Edited)

    Hey Jimss! It is Golden here, for a review! Now, unless I am mistaken, this is the first chapter with no prologue or anything. If there is something I'm missing, ...

    Feb 20, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Goodbye

    Hey Sheyren, it's Zly here for a review! She hadn't been able to find a job, and often complained that people were reluctant to hire someone like her, because of ...

    Jan 28, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Magnetized

    Hey there! It's Zly here, for a review. I'm not a huge poetry writer or editor, so keep that in mind for this review! I really enjoyed this piece. I ...

    Jan 28, 2017


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