GoldFlame

Back again! Once again, my only nitpicks are technical-y. Your descriptions succeeded in snaring my interest, yet leave room open for interpretation. Bear in mind, the slightest grammatical mistake as

Hey, Joshua! Here as promised! The poem engaged all of my senses. The imagery was elaborate, but it didn't swallow the meaning. You left room open for interpretation, turning a ...

Hey, FourTris! Nice username ;). It's clever to abridge your chapters, as shorter pieces tend to attract more reviews. But the current average is about three times this. I do ...

No one *like*d this? No one? Shame on all YWSers. Happiness bubbles on the surface of my laughter. It can't be a coincidence that we both like verbing nouns :D. ...

Ugh. I need to stop *like*ing stuff and neglecting to review it. And all those fantastic reviews you've given me, and...well. Here's a hodgepodge of gushing and lame nitpicks. I've ...

Back again! These reviews are so wimpy in contrast to yours. I wish I could repay the favor with quantity, but nooo, your piece had to be so perfect. So, ...

I had a dream that I reviewed this. Anywho ... Back again! This chapter's a definite crowd-pleaser. Jam-packed with action, threaded with emotion ... and her power ignites the reader's ...

Now I'm starting to *like* the chapters before I even read them. You never disappoint :D. I wasn't sure if I should kill Durriken off or not... admittedly, I grew ...

Hey, Buzzy! I usually don't expect much of novel beginnings. You know, they're your prime chance to develop the exposition, and the exposition's typically the dullest part of the novel. ...

Hey, Lucrezia! A little late, but here nonetheless. You truly possess talent. I mean, you seldom see authors on here that devote time to reflections; it's just action, dialogue, action, ...

Hey, Verser! This was absolutely beautiful. Sometimes the rawest emotion translates the smoothest--no complex descriptions, no delicate words to mask its meaning. The ending was my favorite line: For

I wonder if anyone else caught the Doctor Who reference? That aside, beautiful. The rhythm was such that my eyes skated down the poem, and when I glanced up, I ...

Hey, Kelsey! Welcome to YWS! :D This has some potential. Everything flowed, all expressions cemented by effective transitions. The characters were also realistic. I could walk by them on the ...

Flame here, as promised! Let me just jot down my first impression: Wow. The ultimate cliché, and you've transformed it. And by transforming it, I don't mean masking the theme ...

Hey, Subtle! This was absolutely fabulous. Well-measured pacing, solid theme. I'm usually against detailed descriptions, but in this case...wow. You stole my breath away. It didn't obscure the meaning