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Thank you so much! :D

I normally don't read love poems but I really liked this one. I love your two-line-per-stanza format and it reads very well. I would have to agree with TB317, though. ...

I'm describing an old street, full of cracks, dim, sombre yellow lights over a dark road. The traffic lights are green, red and yellow, the lamppost replaced the dying sun ...

I'm sorry to bump this but I would really like some feedback on it. I spent a long time on this poem.

For some reason, this reminded me of Redwall written by Brian Jacques, there was a poem rather similar to this one becasue to the use of metaphor. well done, though. ...

I've decided since my poems get little to no feedback, I'm going to comment on every poem with no comments. I can't see why you don't have any yet. This ...

I absolutely love the simplicity of it. Very emotional and it's wonderful how you can put all that feeling into those short lines. Well done.

Very simplistic and soft-sounding. Some lines are too long for the stanza they are in but otherwise good poem. I love the feel of it and how you can almost ...

Well done! It sort of sounds like a modern-day Shakespearian poem. Loved your choice of words and the way everything flowed into the next line. Love your writing style, fantastic! ...

Hauntingly beautiful. I feel like I'm walking alone down a dark street when I read this. You may have used the word "lurk" one too many times but other than ...

The speaker has nothing to do with the government, but the speaker is older, knows things, has been told things. The speaker does not know good english, the speaker is ...

Thank you. I will always keep writing. :)

A fun poem. Good job as I see all the errors have been corrected by others. Still, dispite this, it's a good poem.

Wow. You are very good at setting mood. Fantastic work.

Thank you! My objective was to write a longer poem, but with a type of flow that would keep the reader interested.