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Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. :)

Thank you so much! :D

That would be absolutely awesome! I would love that!

Thank you! I really appreciate it.

I don't tend to bother with "style" or "Proper rhyme-schemes". The sharp transition was intentional as it was based on a dream that started out simple but took a sharp ...

I am sorry for bumping this topic, but I really want some reviews on it. Go ahead, tear it apart!

Really well done! i don't think I could change anything. You're grammar is great and this poem flows well. Very well done! I love it! Keep writing! Never stop. -Greena

Not the Christian God. Not by any means. This poem was about life and death. The tie between the two and the 'god' who must set each in motion. I ...

Very interesting and thoughtful I liked the flow quite a bit. (I'm sorry, I'm not a great reviewer) I can't think of really anthing to change because it left such ...

This is a very interesting poem. I love the concept and your style. The flow is very good, it almost has a beat to it, which I quite liked. Very ...

Thank you. :) I was really happy with how this one turned out.

Thank you, I often use a strange set-up. I usually just start writing a poem and see how it flows.

Ugh. I hate that that colour was taken already. I don't really like this poem any more. It doesn't have the soul that I put into it the first time ...

Very nice imagery! I like the feel of this and how well it flows. I can't see much you can fix, really, this is very well done. I'd say just ...