Glauke

Wow. Okay, this is really good. The message was clear and concise, and yet different people can still interpret this in different ways. Your emotions were powerful, and the poem ...

Arggh, I posted a review on this earlier but I was stupid and I forgot to clarify that this was a review and not a commet, so the review was ...

Hi there. :) First of all, let me just say that the imagery you used here is beautiful. The message is concise, and it comes through loud and clear. Your ...

Hi there. :) I really liked these. They're very concise, which is to say that they get a strong message across with only a few words. I especially liked the ...

Hi there :) I think this poem is really lovely. I specifically liked how it paints a strong picture in the reader's mind. I was a little bit unsure of ...

This is very nice. The first time I read it, it was quite relaxing and soothing. However, I went back and reread it more carefully, and I found a few ...

Aww :) This is nice, it made me laugh. I'm an actress myself, actually, so I kind of related to this. I couldn't find any grammar or spelling errors, good ...

Hi, Kyla! I like this piece, it's very thought-provoking. I think somebody already pointed out that you misspelled "heart", but you also misspelled "breathe" the first time you used it. ...

This was a gorgeous poem and you did an amazing job! My favorite part was "we found something special in our veins, and it'll be the closest we ever get ...

This was a great piece; it flowed very smoothly and fluently expressed emotions. It was fluid and descriptive, and it's not often that you see a poem in the second ...

Hey! This looks really good. I noticed that you used "And," a little too repetitively. Try to keep that to a minimum. You can just take the comma out. That ...

Hey Libby! I'm Penni, here to review. [spoiler] I grabbed my medium sized duffel bag out my closet. I threw everything I would probably need until I could come back ...

Hey Solvalery! This was a fantastic piece. I can't find anything wrong with it. Honestly. So far, I'm failing the Reviewing Checklist in the corner. Oh well. This piece exceeds ...

Hey Gen! Okay, just to warn you: this might be a pretty sucky review. Because, quite frankly, I honestly could not find anything wrong with this . Apart from what ...

Hear ye, hear ye! PenPrincess has arrived, at the request of Her Storiness, SweetMoments! So, yeah, here I am. Well, great job with this, SM. It moves seamlessly from one ...