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Re: Another Truth: Pain and Knowledge
Hi I'm Giselle and here's my review ! I love your choice of words and how they help make the flow of the poem. Your style itself was really good ...
Jun 8, 2014 -
Re: The Scientist
Hi I'm Giselle and here's my review ! This was actually the first poem I read that involved numbers and equations that held a different meaning instead of the one ...
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: Mirror Image
Hi I'm Giselle on to the review I have to say a few tears came from my eyes when I was reading this. I have this friend that's finding it ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: You
Hi ya, its Giselle with an review !!! I love the rhyming in this poem. The flow of this poem is a series of emotions of both good and bad ...
Sep 5, 2013 -
Re: An Ode To Her
Hey I'm Giselle and I'm here to review, so lets get to it. This was simple yet holds so many emotions. "The cold chill creeps back in cause I know ...
Aug 22, 2013 -
Re: Hoping For You
Your poem was really great to read but I had a hard time understanding what the poem really means. It does holds something really special but lack deeper feeling. To ...
May 13, 2011 -
Re: Music and Lyrics
Hey There! I just read your story and I think it was great. I like how you choice to pick songs that express your character feelings. I think its the ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: By Day's End.
Your character seem to have a personal issue going on here. I would add a little more details about that but I like it. You shouldnt stop this story, keep ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: My love.
I love your poem. The last part made me laugh. I thought you were talking about someone but you were talking about chocolate. I like how you describe your feelings ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: i love you. what else is there to say?
Hey I love you poem but you should had some stanzas so readers wont have a hard time reading it. Also "i" should be capitalize (always) because you representing yourself. ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Guardians of the Jrakkon Stone (Chapter 2)
Hey There Your story is very good but you have to work on your dialogue, you use to much. Why don't you weave in some more description and inner thinking. ...
Feb 7, 2011
