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Giselle97

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Another Truth: Pain and Knowledge

    Hi I'm Giselle and here's my review ! I love your choice of words and how they help make the flow of the poem. Your style itself was really good ...

    Jun 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Humor Re: The Scientist

    Hi I'm Giselle and here's my review ! This was actually the first poem I read that involved numbers and equations that held a different meaning instead of the one ...

    Jun 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Mirror Image

    Hi I'm Giselle on to the review I have to say a few tears came from my eyes when I was reading this. I have this friend that's finding it ...

    May 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: You

    Hi ya, its Giselle with an review !!! I love the rhyming in this poem. The flow of this poem is a series of emotions of both good and bad ...

    Sep 5, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: An Ode To Her

    Hey I'm Giselle and I'm here to review, so lets get to it. This was simple yet holds so many emotions. "The cold chill creeps back in cause I know ...

    Aug 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Hoping For You

    Your poem was really great to read but I had a hard time understanding what the poem really means. It does holds something really special but lack deeper feeling. To ...

    May 13, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Music and Lyrics

    Hey There! I just read your story and I think it was great. I like how you choice to pick songs that express your character feelings. I think its the ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: By Day's End.

    Your character seem to have a personal issue going on here. I would add a little more details about that but I like it. You shouldnt stop this story, keep ...

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My love.

    I love your poem. The last part made me laugh. I thought you were talking about someone but you were talking about chocolate. I like how you describe your feelings ...

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: i love you. what else is there to say?

    Hey I love you poem but you should had some stanzas so readers wont have a hard time reading it. Also "i" should be capitalize (always) because you representing yourself. ...

    Feb 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Guardians of the Jrakkon Stone (Chapter 2)

    Hey There Your story is very good but you have to work on your dialogue, you use to much. Why don't you weave in some more description and inner thinking. ...

    Feb 7, 2011


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