GingerLizzy

I have to admit, it's not my normal kind of poem. But, I liked this, it was different and structured well. Good work for capturing my attentions.

Not bad. Not bad. I liked it, but I didn't love it - although I have no words as to why I think it could be better. Sorry I am ...

Whoa, this is actually quite good. I loved it, and it had great imagary, but it'd be nicer if it had more. It ends so soon and leave my dangling.

Note: I'm not a serious person, therefore I do poems like these. I revolve around the world of comedy and actually hate being taken serious. As long as the reader ...

[Applauds with enthusiasm, so much so that she falls over backwards] Loved it to be truly honest. Definately a piece of art and I can find nothing that I could ...

I'm not so sure I liked the concept, but I'm not a fan of the depressing poems and stories. I felt as though, before we reach the end, the poem ...

I liked this, but what I will say is that some of it tended to be structured like a list and it didn't really flow all to well. I did ...

Hmm, different and simple. Lovely, like a piece of art that you have to look at for hours until you actually understand it from the writers point of view.

This is a strange and altogether interesting piece, mixing English with Maths? It's really food actually and it made me laugh, although I have to think is it really that ...

Hmm.. Interesting and different. I can't really comment on much mind, as it seems the other people have, so all I'll say is to consider their suggestions and porbably follow ...

Not too bad, but not great either. Imagary was good in places; flow was okay in places; but the poem was too long and it became tedious to read. Maybe ...

Ooh, I liked this. Good imagary and flow and the sructure was different, so that's always a nice change. ^^

Alainna you are a wonderful poet ^^ I loves this, and it flows well 'n' all, with great emotion and depth to it. It made me feel a little sad ...

This structure was strange and abrupt, which made the poem askew. It made me want to stop reading immediately. But, I like the story behind the poem and think that ...

I liked this, but I thought that the flow was a little slow and didn't make me want to read the rest, although I did. The rhymes were god and ...