GingerLizzy

Okay, I scanned over this but I didn't really read it properly, so don't take my review to heart because I admit; I haven't reviewed it properly. I dislike the ...

This is good and hard-hitting; you've really captured what people are like today. I always say this to people because it's true; everyone nowadays revolves around their image and they ...

Not bad... I think. I didn't like the structure that much; I prefer the good structures of traditional sranzas compared to this - I feel as though it affects the ...

I kinda like the rhythm in this, but if I'm honest, I didn't really find this as striking as I thought I would. When I read the first stanza, I ...

I liked this, it made me smile and think; whoa this is funny but also quite mellow at the same time. I like how you put the cotton buds as ...

Phew, this is powerful stuff you have here. Your imagery is beautiful and the flow, along with the meaning of the poem adds a real impact to the reader. I ...

Hm, I wouldn't really call this of poem, of sorts. I just didn't feel as though you put enough rhythm into it to make it flow like a poem should; ...

One thing; rating system? Okay, now the poem. This was wonderful, I thought you picked up on the ideas you used very well. I wasn't keen on the structure of ...

I liked this, I actually loved it somewhat; right from the start! Your imagery and language throughout was exsquisite [I cannot spell :)] and you placed so much emotion into ...

Oof, I found the structure of this just too much. I don't understand why you've broken up each and every line so that it continues onto the next; it ruins ...

I liked this although the rhyming scheme was just none-existant for me. When it was there, it was wonderful, although when you began to build up on that, it just ...

Whoa there, Woot. What is this? For once I agree with Brad when he complains about this poem; and I don't do that very often. One thing; it's pretty much ...

[Sighed at Brad's terrible literature temper problems] Kim, unlike some others; I quite liked this. I don't think it was as good as your other poem; "The thin line between ...

Wow, I love the laid back rhyming scheme you have going on here. It really sets across the mood of it being just a lovely and mellow sunset that the ...

I did write an enormous review for this, but my computer went totally phsyco and decided that it should sign me out and when I signed backin again, it hadn't ...