Phew, this is powerful stuff you have here. Your imagery is beautiful and the flow, along with the meaning of the poem adds a real impact to the reader.
I think you've picked a wonderful topic to write about and another good thing is that you didn't make it seem too depressing and morose [I can't spell], and made it somply poetically beautiful. Not all things about death and loss should be unhappy, after all.
Good work,
GingerLove
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