Okay, I scanned over this but I didn't really read it properly, so don't take my review to heart because I admit; I haven't reviewed it properly.
I dislike the structure because to me, it's just one big clump and my brain can't be dealing with that. This is just personal preference, so I suppose you could just ignore that little rant.
I liked the imagery and emotion, but feel as though the flow could be improved to make it seem more poetic and less like a descriptive piece.
Hope this half-hearted attempt of a review helped,
GingerLove
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