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GeoCha

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Removed

    Geo here, and I pretty much established that this story was about this lady flying home for the most part. I have to say it was really descriptive, but if ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: TFoA - Chapter 5

    Geo here for a review, I believe I reviewed one of your chapters before where I loved your teacher and student relationship. Now we have this chapter, and I have ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 11 Part 2

    Hey there, I saw your story didn't have a review so I decided to try it out. It's a good story and this is my first time reading it so ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Horror Re: The Forgotten- HSC (feedback would be amazing)

    Hey there, I see you are new to this, let me be one of the first to welcome you and review your work. I feel like reviewing is getting dead ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 1.1

    Ha, Geo here for a review, and I have to say this story is really different. I got a Star Trek meets animals type of vibe. On top of that, ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Narrative Re: Going through Time-Chapter One: The Beginning of Our Quest

    Hey, Geo here for a review. I like the idea and concept of your story, I really do, and I feel you have potential as a writer, because the concept ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Jamie Foster Chapter 1

    Geo here for a review, and I have to say I enjoyed this one. I like the whole high school vibe, and I pictured everything in my head. This was ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: The 7 Proposals {Chapter 1}

    Woah, I totally love this one. The main character is one some guys can relate to, and I feel like he is a great guy, just misguided. Overall, I love ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: 1

    Wow, I am back to reviewing after a long break, and I have to say I am glad I stumbled upon this. Some might say you are ripping off of ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Script » General, General Re: Kissing lesson with a sandwhich

    Hey, Geo here, and I actually laughed at this script. I liked the randomness of this scene as well, and random moments is something we all have. Ha, was this ...

    Jul 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Four Realms

    Hey there, Geo for a review. This story is interesting and I liked the action to an extent. I was confused at times however. I would say you also over ...

    Jul 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: Straight {Prologue}

    Hey, I like this piece, the concept is different and new, and so I'm looking forward to future chapters. I am a bit confused as to a few things though, ...

    Jul 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 3: Son of Aredes

    Nice chapter!!! I for one loved the action, all the magic and everything. Hilda is easily becoming my second favorite character, and I am fond of Viknor, who I really ...

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Light Doesn't Shine Here

    I like the way you have this story set up. I love thrillers, and mysteries, and this has a great deal of potential. Your main character seems really scared but ...

    Jul 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: My Place or Yours? [Part 1]

    Ha, I totally didn't notice this was a gay romance till later in the story, mainly because I'm used to the co-ed romances. This is new for me and I ...

    Jul 7, 2014


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