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Re: Removed
Geo here, and I pretty much established that this story was about this lady flying home for the most part. I have to say it was really descriptive, but if ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: TFoA - Chapter 5
Geo here for a review, I believe I reviewed one of your chapters before where I loved your teacher and student relationship. Now we have this chapter, and I have ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 11 Part 2
Hey there, I saw your story didn't have a review so I decided to try it out. It's a good story and this is my first time reading it so ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: The Forgotten- HSC (feedback would be amazing)
Hey there, I see you are new to this, let me be one of the first to welcome you and review your work. I feel like reviewing is getting dead ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 1.1
Ha, Geo here for a review, and I have to say this story is really different. I got a Star Trek meets animals type of vibe. On top of that, ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: Going through Time-Chapter One: The Beginning of Our Quest
Hey, Geo here for a review. I like the idea and concept of your story, I really do, and I feel you have potential as a writer, because the concept ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: Jamie Foster Chapter 1
Geo here for a review, and I have to say I enjoyed this one. I like the whole high school vibe, and I pictured everything in my head. This was ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: The 7 Proposals {Chapter 1}
Woah, I totally love this one. The main character is one some guys can relate to, and I feel like he is a great guy, just misguided. Overall, I love ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: 1
Wow, I am back to reviewing after a long break, and I have to say I am glad I stumbled upon this. Some might say you are ripping off of ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: Kissing lesson with a sandwhich
Hey, Geo here, and I actually laughed at this script. I liked the randomness of this scene as well, and random moments is something we all have. Ha, was this ...
Jul 14, 2014 -
Re: Four Realms
Hey there, Geo for a review. This story is interesting and I liked the action to an extent. I was confused at times however. I would say you also over ...
Jul 13, 2014 -
Re: Straight {Prologue}
Hey, I like this piece, the concept is different and new, and so I'm looking forward to future chapters. I am a bit confused as to a few things though, ...
Jul 12, 2014 -
Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 3: Son of Aredes
Nice chapter!!! I for one loved the action, all the magic and everything. Hilda is easily becoming my second favorite character, and I am fond of Viknor, who I really ...
Jul 8, 2014 -
Re: The Light Doesn't Shine Here
I like the way you have this story set up. I love thrillers, and mysteries, and this has a great deal of potential. Your main character seems really scared but ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: My Place or Yours? [Part 1]
Ha, I totally didn't notice this was a gay romance till later in the story, mainly because I'm used to the co-ed romances. This is new for me and I ...
Jul 7, 2014
