GeeLyria

Hi Malachi! =D I'm Sol! I'm here to tell you something that may or may not be really significant. In fact, it may sound kind of silly, but I think ...

Hi, Marde. :) I'm here to review, as I promised. Let's start with the start. I agree with tronks when he/she says the beginning doesn't really hook the reader. And ...

Hi IHI. So. I don't hate this, but it could definitely be better with a little bit of creativity. My problem with this piece is not what you wanted to ...

Hi Jessa. As I've let you know before I'm a huge fan of your poetry; the rhythm and flow is breath-taking, and the wording is excellent, I also like your ...

Hi rishabh. I am GeeLyria and I am here to review. Okay. So, this is kind of lyrical, and I like that~ it makes you want to finish reading it. ...

Hi Panda! Okay. I like how you narrate this; it is catchy in a dramatic and fun way, which is good (It really reminds me of my little brother's writing ...

Wow, Mossyra. This is probably one of the most beautiful poems I have read in this website. Your style, rhythm, and wording makes is so easy to read and the ...

Hi there, Saterdays! I'm GeeLyria and I'm here to review. I'm wondering if the format went evil on you, or if you just wrote this piece to be stanzas-less. I'd ...

Hi there, kiddo! Naira here to review for you! =D You would be lucky enough, To travel a 100 countries in a rough-, & rocky adventure, and do stuff. I ...

Hi, ImaginatiionIsBest. I'm GeeLyria and I'm here to review. I like the intro of this; it's pretty catchy and it makes me curious, which is good. However, there was something ...

Hi there, Philosopha. This is one huge block that provokes laziness. That's no good, my fellow writer. Your language is rich, your poem is deep, and you really really need ...

Hi Hanorah! I'm GeeLyria and I'll be reviewing for you. Alright, quick review here. So I like the sound of this; it's quite delicious~ the rhythm, the flow, the wording~ ...

Hi Sparkle! I'm here to review for you. If anything, I'm here to mention what's already been mentioned, but I'll tell you why. Stanzas are important! Stanzas... could decide if ...

Hi Sapi. I'll be reviewing for you today! I'm going to be really honest because time is tik-toking. I believe this was too simple to be so repetitive. You said ...

Hi, Belle. I'm here to review for you! Alright. I feel like this poem is just a bunch of random thoughts put together in a few stanzas. Mainly, because since ...