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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Boat

    Ahaha, hi there anna9---and the rest of the numbers. Well, I had never seen such an amazing poem being so short. Truly beautiful. You managed to say a lot in ...

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Too Close To Home

    Hi there Rascalover. I'm here to give you your review for free. :) Okay, lately, I'm not in the mood for romantic stories or anything like that, but I think ...

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Hand to Hold - A 7/7 memorial

    Hi there, Mac ^_^ I'm here to give you your free review... This story is shocking, actually, I never knew about 7/7 until now. Your writing is great, no doubt. ...

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Change Of Mood....Change Of Thoughts

    ADAM!! AMAZING!! Geez! It's like you always choose all the perfect words. It flows greatly, and every line makes sense. :o I love the start, I love the end, and ...

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Story of a Ship and its Sailor

    Wow! Hi there Anwesha! You've done an amazing job with this poem. I love it. And it's funny that it could easily be like some sort of hidden message covered ...

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The lies we tell ourselves

    Oh wow! Hi there, AngusMacdonald! Awesome job, kid! I like your poem, it has potential. But I have the feeling that the second and third stanza are by far better ...

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: You’re too young for the age of pain

    Okay... Hi there smellslikespirit... I'm kind of confused on what age the character is... But that's probably cause I'm about to fall asleep on the keyboard. I guess it's seventeen? ...

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: When I thought I knew you

    Hi there BlackRoz! I'm Solly. Nice to meet you. Hm... this poem is good for a beginner. What I recommend you is to add a metaphor or two to compare ...

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Love in the Rain

    Hi there, sweethearts. Well, your poem is sweet, but it's kind of simple. I was wondering if you could think about writing this simple topic and turn it into something ...

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Snake Road

    Hi there paintingtherain97! You've got style, my friend! XD Okay, so this poem is certainly different from what I've read. You have nice vocabulary, and you seem to make amazing ...

    Nov 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Marlboro Kiss

    Hi there dreamwalker. I walked on by this poem yesterday, and I loved it. But I see that for some strange and unknown reason, no one has commented on it. ...

    Nov 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Exhaustion

    Hi there, Sarebear! This is one lovely poem you've got here. I love how you manage to give us a message with not-so-common words. And the end just made me ...

    Nov 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Celeste

    Hi there Arciade! I'm Solly, here to comment cause I can't actually give you a review. I can't believe this story has only one review and only one like! This ...

    Nov 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I need help with this one.

    Hi there, craz33me. I'm Solly, and I will try to help you. What you've got is good. But there's a problem. What is this poem about? I can't know for ...

    Nov 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Homesick

    Hi there sharitm2. Hahah. I like the topic your bringing us, I myself know the feeling of moving to a totally different place, though, I didn't suffer that much. XD ...

    Nov 9, 2011


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