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D'aww.... Hi there again. I was going to ask what was going on with the line qaralynn pointed out, it certainly distracted me. I didn't even get to figure out ...

Hi there free2sing. This is nice. Your writing is lovely. But I would suggest you to separate the dialog from one another, and make more paragraphs. Another thing is that ...

Bahahaha! Pollar Bear, hi! It's amazing how you put a lot of emotion in such a short piece. I love it, as I know the feeling. XD Lol. But yeah, ...

Ahahaha Hi there Aerona! You have done a great job with this very, very short story. xD I wish I knew the character better, though. About the writing there were ...

Hi there Maki-Chan Eh... I don't believe in wicca. o.o Actually, I don't know much about it. But the first two lines made me smile, I didn't know what the ...

Lol. Hi there Jessa... Very, very original piece you've got here. Though, the start kind of bored me, because I felt like it was the same old thing. XD But ...

Hi there dogs! Nice to see you keep on writing poems. That's great! 8D Okay, since I'm a fan of you as a poet, and you know it... ;) I'm ...

Hellow, StoryWeaver13!! I think your poem is pretty good. I love that you kept on writing with the same personality, how you mentioned 'silly' three times and how it started ...

Hi there UrbanNomad. Lol, I love your name. xD But let's get to reviewing. Okay, I like the topic you're bringing us, it's something not worn out and something newborn ...

Hi there icanhassuicide....? Uh,that's an unusual name. *tilts head* Okay, let's get to your writing. Even though I'm not a fan of emo poetry, cause I'd rather be happy, I ...

Hi again AngusMacdonald. You're awesome, boy. You put so much emotion into this poem. I'm normally not this honest, but my eyes watered as I kept on reading. I wouldn't ...

Hi there noornia. No, this is not bad at all. The subject is great and your writing is really good. The thing is that... it doesn't look like a poem. ...

Hi Mikko! Wow, seems like someone gave you a thesaurus and you learned every single world. XD Beautiful. Hmm... This is one deep poem you've got here. I'm not sure ...

D'awww... this is so adorable. I mean, hi mattimias. Your poem is so amazing. I love the subject, and the character's personality. It's weird that you used old English to ...

LILAPURPS!!! I love this! I don't get why you have no reviews yet. We all have moments of weakness, moments when we feel everything is crashing down, and I'm happy ...