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Ohhai again, Mirasol. I like this. Powerful, beautiful, lovely ending, by the way. Although, I feel like you're rushing it in the other stanzas. Like you write really fast and ...

Hi there, my friend, Tuuuuuucker! ^_^ As always, lovely. Although, I have two things to say... Silly stuff. xD Like for example, listen to me when I say this, Tucker... ...

Oh, wow. Hi there, Formslipper. This is beautiful. I love how it flows, the idea you brought is really creative and when you come down to analyze it, it's the ...

Oh, wow. Hi there, my friend, Mirasol. Wow. At first I thought your poem was simple, but it's actually really deep. Perhaps the way you worded it is simple. That ...

Hi there, Trigger. Hm... I like the subject you're bringing us, and what you've got is certainly good. But like Zaid said, I think you could make it longer. I'm ...

Hi there Kafkaescence! Hm... I really like this. You managed to make your poem flow neatly and the message is fantastic. The words and the metaphors are lovely, you're giving ...

Hi there, MusicLover797! This is lovely, very sweet and I love that. You have talent, no doubt. I truly love the fact that you didn't say, "I remember when you ...

Hi there Impossible. Looooool. Harsh, girl. Good job. I'm sure this loser will find somenthing better to do, or he'll try to get better at lying. I've read like three ...

Hi there, Justagirl. Hmm... I like the concept of the poem and what you want to bring us. But it's really simple. What is written inside the parentheses is indeed ...

Hi there, Choco

Awww... Hi again, my friend, Angus! Lovely, as always. ^_^ You're great. And, I have to comment on your piece to say this: Have you notice this about romance poetry? ...

Hi there Whispibey. This is one amazing poem. I love the subject you're bringing us, and I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it greatly. At least one ...

ARTSY!! Hi there, my friend! ^_^ Ooooh, for the club you talked to me about. That is so awesome. And, oh wow, this is lovely. You've done a great job ...

Hi there, PurpleEurope! Hmm... I kind of like it, though it could flow more. I would use other words to finish a few lines. Like for example here: "We sat ...

Hi again, WinterBloom! I love that now you're writing quotation marks, I can understand better now! 8D That is very, very good. One thing that will make this look even ...