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Hey StrangeLove. :) Very nice poem StrangeLove. No complex themes or metaphors. Just a simple story :D Now lets get to business :D I liked your speaker. It's a very ...

Hey Fortis :D here to review :D MERRY REVIEW DAY! Stanza One Alright, a very strong opening stanza. I read it a few times to try piece everything together, and ...

Are you ready? REVIEW COMIN' AT YA! As you know! I've already shared my opinions on most if this, which is that I loved it! As always! So I'm going ...

Hi, I'm Hightop, and firstly, a warm welcome to YWS :) (I'll be at your wall shortly!) xD, now on to reviewing! Firstly, I noticed a lack of capitalization and ...

*claps* very well done on this Rosie! Defiantly the best chapter yet! Your descriptions were amazing, I could picture exactly what was going on. Everything was paced, I didn't feel ...

Hello! Hightop is here to review. Firstly, I love your story. Your writing was good, nothing popped out at me as particularly wrong, spelling and grammar wise. I loved your ...

Hi :) Hightop here to review :D, I'm going to take it stanza by stanza if that's okay. stanza one The first word, 'There', should have a capital. As should ...

Hey there girl, as requested, here's your review! For starters, this story is amazing! Seriously! Now I think your protagonist is amazing! She is such a complex character. I love ...

Hello Dr. I thought I'd just leave a small comment, but then I realised I have twenty four reviews, and by God I want that second star, so have a ...

I'M HERE TO STALK I'M HERE TO REVIEW! Firstly just two small things. You said "Believe my baby I would" which would imply that this person is in disbelief of ...

Hey there :) Hightop here to review a second of your poems. Your use of words and punctuation was good. Your feelings were Crystal clear, as was the subject. Major ...

Hello there :D, Hightop here to review your story. Firstly, that is an interesting prologue. You introduced your character very well. One thing I would have liked to know is ...

Hello Djinn, I don't really know much about Japanese street fashion, but I might write something small because every piece deserves a review. For starters, especially in essays like this, ...

Hello Blackwater :D Hightop here to review :D, First of all, music is an interesting and fun topic to explore, and one of the best parts of a poem about ...

Hi there :D Hightop here to review your poem :), For starters, this piece is almost devoid of punctuation.I think you could benefit from using more full stops and commas, ...