Gabriellemarice99

I love this story! The introduction was my favorite part because it revels her private parts. This chapter was less action more thought and I like that. You are starting ...

Hi your not so secret Santa is here for another review. I really like this story even though I'm a little confused at the moment I'm sure you will clear ...

Hello I'm Gabby and I'm your not so secret Santa this Summer Christmas. "It was like I was a bug under a microscope." Good simile but its a bit wordy ...

I really do love the way you wrote this. The symbolism is beautiful and you almost had the 5 7 5 patter perfect. "One can be the hero." is 6 ...

Hello thanks for pestering me to tell me this part of your story was ready because I'm rather enjoying it. I'd first like to compliment the personalities your characters express. ...

Hi I'm Gabby a fellow poet and I love your rant even though mine tend to be more intense is believe the public will like yours more as it is ...

Hey I'm Gabby and I love this! First, I love the personality of the two characters, and the relationship between them. You really show that in the beginning paragraphs. The ...

Hi I'm Gabby and I love this poem! First of all I find you description of your work to be what drew me to read it, you sure can catch ...

I really like this good job

I saw alot of typing errors that you can easily go in and correct no big deal there. To me something is missing it seems kind of short and choppy ...

I really enjoy this poem because its very relatable. In today's society there are so many unanswered questions and I feel that this conveys a revelation of sorts and for ...

Hi I'm Gabby first of all welcome to YWS, Now I'm no professional but I have studied child and young adult psychology and this is some stuff in my notes ...

This is kinda a weird way of wording it maybe take out the first as and change the first far to distant. "As i stood far as i could, far ...

Hi the poem is lovely but I don't think the title fits. I love this poem because each person can gather something different from it. Its very abstract and creative. ...

Hi I'm Gabby and I love this poem! I would add the following question marks. "Why does the world seem so wrong, When I’m trying my best to move on? ...