GDrama97

This si a very nice poem which I really enjoyed. My favorite flower is a rose so nice job on writing a poem about that. From the beginning of this ...

You story is very good. I quite liked it. But as VeerenVKS said you do have a few things to fix up which will make this story a lot better. ...

This is very heartwarming story showing us how people can love one another in different ways. It is very sad that the guy loved her but didn't want to admit ...

This is a very good poem which I can relate to. I have a sister even though she isn't little she a wonderful voice and really admire it so I ...

This is a great piece of writing. I can really relate to it as I know what it feels like to be lonely. very nicely thought out and well written. ...

Nice piece of writing. I really enjoyed it. Well written, good description and well thought out poem. Just be careful with punctuation and grammar. I couldn't find much wrong with ...

This story Is lacking characters descriptions. You should expand on each of the characters to give us more of an idea of who they are and how they fit into ...

This is a very well thought out short story even though it is a little short. One criticism I have with regards to this story is that the characters could ...

This a very good short story. In the first sentence you said Katie his wife. You need to tell the reader who you are referring to as his. Also I ...

This is a very well written poem of forgiveness. I really enjoyed it. It really shows us ways in which couples and everyday people use forgiveness. Keep up the good ...

This chapter of a novel is very well written. From the first sentence I can gather a very good picture of what is happening due to the well written imagery. ...