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Re: iii - counting backwards
So, I'm going to start by saying I'm pretty crap at reviews. I really liked this because the detail that you go through for your decision does a great job ...
Dec 11, 2016 -
Re: Tick Tock Goes the Clock
This was honestly one of the best things I've read on this site. I didn't see it coming that it was a horror poem. The only thing I didn't like ...
Dec 9, 2012 -
Re: Let Your Voice Cross These Borders That We've Built
I'm honestly not that good at critiquing. I'll say that I agree that your stanzas were a little long. I wish that I could hear how you would read it ...
Dec 9, 2012 -
Re: New shirts, old tears, and roundhouse kicks to the head
ok this is going to be more of an oppinonated thingy than a real review. From a readers point of view you're going 'what the fork is going on.' I'm ...
Aug 4, 2012 -
Re: Love turned to hate
wow I love this. I really do. The writing doesn't seem quite shakespearian but like the flow of it and the imagery and the detail really reminds me of a ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Bad Days at School
Dude this is awesome. Not saying anything bad but it kinda rhymes like a really teenager-y doctor seusse type thing. I was reading the places you'll go today and was ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Unwritten
I think it's cool that you turned your writers block into a poem. I never would have been able to think of that. When I get writers block, I sit ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Snow Day
omg this is completely adorable. I love the imagery of how it's portraid. I know i love snow days. I really loved the 'as the snow falls during the night' ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Batman: Arkham City Fanfic
to be honest I only read the nightwing part. I liked it and I'm a total fanboy and I love nightwing. I fanboy so hard over dc and you've earned ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Ugly Rainbows
I like this. What I got across from this is that you want people to more accept what they have and the simple things instead of wanting more. I kinda ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Two Types of Health
I'm not sure about this piece. for me the imagery and the flow were a bit off. the central idea of what you're trying to get accross was also hard ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: 毒
holy crap bro. this is like something edgar allen poe would write. I really like the name. I take japanese and I felt so cool that i knew what that ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Under My Skin
holy crap all i can say is this is awesome. it all flowed poetry and all the rhymes..magnificent. there were some rhymes I looked back on and just thought 'how ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: The Wave
i like it. it's very descriptive. i used to live on the beach and it made me want to go boogie boading again lol. so onto business -stern face- your ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: 16 and realising...
I didn't understand this at first but i started listening to drake while reading this and it's been helping with the trickier pieces. this is really cool. i mean i'm ...
Dec 13, 2011
