Frinderman

This is one of the most beautiful poems i have ever read of yours. I just need to say that.

I don't really feel like reviewing right now but I read both of these poems and I really liked this one. It felt very personal and relateable and it kept ...

This is a beautiful masterpiece of art

Thank you again. This poem was very personal (though that doesn't mean much since all of them are), and I did rush a little with it so I know it ...

Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it. Your comment about "an" actually made me realize I made a mistake while editing. "Pastel bricks" and "heat" are ...

Thank you for both of your reviews, I can see you truly go in depth into poetry. I understand I might of said things a bit weird, and I could ...

Thank you for spotting that mistake for me. Also, the stanza beneath that answers your second question.

I don't tell lies in my poetry. I also tend to not give straight answers. Oops. But yes, and you don't have to apologize for asking.

This is a great poem of yours. I really enjoyed it. ^-^

May I ask what you used to format this poem? I have never known how to upload it like this and I would really appreciate it if you could let ...

I apologize. Yes it is not a negative term and it is a literary device, I shouldn't have mentioned that but because I did what I should have stated was ...

Capitalization isn't something that is necessary in poetry. Also just a tip, I wouldn't use "repetitive" the way you did, that is usually a negative description for poetry and a ...

I don't have much to say, but this is a great poem. You always seem to express your themes very well, making it look easier than it really is and ...

Thank you for the review. All I want to comment is that my use of "mire" is intentional, it's for contrast. Kind of.. image a fire swamp or a flaming ...

Thank you for the review! I know the wording is a bit weird, though to me it began to sound better after reading/saying it several times. The reason for the ...