Frayer

K imma review this! Ok, so I like the story. A lot actually. It's different from the categories that I normally read haha but that's because I clicked on it ...

Imma review this! K, first off, catchy title. I have to admit I was a little scared to read it at first but it just seemed so mysterious that I ...

Imma review this! K, so Hi! You know me. I decided I wanted to read more of your works and found this and decided I love it. On to the ...

Imma review this! K, so I like the story. It's scary to think about something like this actually happening. You captured the suspense and scariness of it all. I actually ...

Hi so imma review this! Ok, first off I like the stories concept, I really do. It just seems like you were rushed to write it, like you did it ...

K so imma review this! I really like your story. I like how you summed up the character's personality through her thoughts, but in the future you should italicize them ...

Hi so imma review this! First off I liked the idea of the story but I really didn't understand the concept. Your imagery was perfect but a few details added ...

Hi I'm Frayer and I just wanna say........that I love this. I thought I was gonna be bored this whole summer until I found this site along with it's stories ...

Hi Imma review this! K, so this is funny. Like really really funny. I'm a really big procrastinator so this relates to me a lot. I like your details and ...

Hi so imma review this! First off I am loving this story. The concept is mystifying which is what I like. The imagery is perfect along with the details. I ...

HI so imma review this First of great job i love stories like this they're a fun read for me. It had a really intriguing beginning. It hooked me and ...

Hi so imma review this! First of all congrats there was only one punctuation or grammar mistake wohoo. I think a lot of that had to do with the fact ...

K imma review this! First off, it's gray not grey when you were referring to the color of Grey's eyes. The story has a really good concept. The starting sentence ...

K so Imma review this! I love historical stories. It's nice to relive old times every now and then. The imagery in this story was outstanding. I could picture every ...

Hi! Awesome work! I really liked the concept of the story. The imagery was just amazing. I could picture myself sitting right next to charlie in that dark living room. ...