FourLeafClover

Thanks for the review! I'll think about the structuring part, thanks for pointing that out!

Thanks for the review! I love archaeology too! Since I noticed that not many characters enjoy it, like you said, I made sure to have the main character be obsessed ...

Thanks, I hope you have a good day/night, too!

Thanks for the review! I'll work on that word!

Thank you for the review! After I went back to read it, I realize that you're right about the last stanza, so I'll try to figure out how to change ...

This is a really important thing for people to be knowing about it, so thank you for sharing this with people on YWS. The more people who know about it, ...

Thanks for the review! In the Google Doc I was working on, I did edit it so that she didn't reveal too much. I do plan on spending more time ...

Thanks for the review! The wicked muse will be coming up later in my book Vic Lawrence book, and I wanted to keep it a secret who she was so ...

Thanks for the review! I'll work on the syllables!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review! You're right, it'd be a good idea to change that sentence a bit. Thanks for pointing it out!

Oh, god, shoot! Thanks for pointing out the typo!

Thank you for pointing out the typo! I didn't notice it, so I'm glad you brought it to my attention!

Thanks for the review! You're right, I should work on the pacing. I definitely agree that if I slow some parts down, it would be a lot better! Thanks!